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So i don't think ive ever done this???
Go on. I can take it. (I think.) |
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new main pic is great ...and you also have cute feet!
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new main pic is great ...and you also have cute feet! |
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Aye, a wee bit rough around the edges and your toe nails need clipping, but you'll pull someone eventually I suppose? Nah, I'm only joking, good, honest profile RCB and I'd use pic no. 4, but that's entirely your decision. 9/10
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Not sure what the point is in showing a pic with just your legs why not just post a full body shot ??
Your other pics are lovely ....Work what your momma gave you RCB Hope you find what you are looking for |
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Not sure what the point is in showing a pic with just your legs why not just post a full body shot ?? Your other pics are lovely ....Work what your momma gave you RCB Hope you find what you are looking for I hide the belly! |
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You don't want to be an iceberg, rather show what you can offer... Some guys like feet and sucking toes...
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You don't want to be an iceberg, rather show what you can offer... Some guys like feet and sucking toes... |
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10/10.
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9/10 :))
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To be honest... the start is weird, redundant and the whole thing can be more compact and thus easier and nicer to read.
Also, get rid of the red screaming "Will tell you later" under Interests. Don't write a tome in there, but say something at least. Now WILL TELL YOU LATER is the first thing someone sees and they're likely off. I am not a superhero or a saint. = subconsciously knocking yourself The whole "Who needs food ... people call me" is redundant. Goes for everyone. So first you lower yourself, continue to make a bland statement, then there's "I'm a mom and I love God". Not a great start. Then "Looking to see who's out there"... Makes me feel like DEEEUHHH!!! EVERYONE on a dating site is. Redundant and pointless. Why not write a better beginning, something positive about yourself and what kind of woman you are. And dare to be bold, don't put your foot into clichés! The rest is I love, I love, I love, I love, I love. Pfff.... I got tired after 3 of those. Condense it. You can say all these things in a much clearer and fun to read way. TELL it -more like a short story-, don't make an "I love" summary out of it. And leave some of them out as it's an overload of info. |
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Edited by
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Thu 06/11/20 04:18 AM
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To be honest... the start is weird, redundant and the whole thing can be more compact and thus easier and nicer to read. Also, get rid of the red screaming "Will tell you later" under Interests. Don't write a tome in there, but say something at least. Now WILL TELL YOU LATER is the first thing someone sees and they're likely off. I am not a superhero or a saint. = subconsciously knocking yourself The whole "Who needs food ... people call me" is redundant. Goes for everyone. So first you lower yourself, continue to make a bland statement, then there's "I'm a mom and I love God". Not a great start. Then "Looking to see who's out there"... Makes me feel like DEEEUHHH!!! EVERYONE on a dating site is. Redundant and pointless. Why not write a better beginning, something positive about yourself and what kind of woman you are. And dare to be bold, don't put your foot into clichés! The rest is I love, I love, I love, I love, I love. Pfff.... I got tired after 3 of those. Condense it. You can say all these things in a much clearer and fun to read way. TELL it -more like a short story-, don't make an "I love" summary out of it. And leave some of them out as it's an overload of info. Hmmm well lots to work on then. I'll have some time pretty soon cause im having surgery in a few days lol. I am a mom. I do love God. Most important things in my life. So that's staying. :-) |
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Edited by
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Thu 06/11/20 04:46 AM
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And i love and i love and i love loooool i just cant help myself haha
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To be honest... the start is weird, redundant and the whole thing can be more compact and thus easier and nicer to read. Also, get rid of the red screaming "Will tell you later" under Interests. Don't write a tome in there, but say something at least. Now WILL TELL YOU LATER is the first thing someone sees and they're likely off. I am not a superhero or a saint. = subconsciously knocking yourself The whole "Who needs food ... people call me" is redundant. Goes for everyone. So first you lower yourself, continue to make a bland statement, then there's "I'm a mom and I love God". Not a great start. Then "Looking to see who's out there"... Makes me feel like DEEEUHHH!!! EVERYONE on a dating site is. Redundant and pointless. Why not write a better beginning, something positive about yourself and what kind of woman you are. And dare to be bold, don't put your foot into clichés! The rest is I love, I love, I love, I love, I love. Pfff.... I got tired after 3 of those. Condense it. You can say all these things in a much clearer and fun to read way. TELL it -more like a short story-, don't make an "I love" summary out of it. And leave some of them out as it's an overload of info. Hmmm welll lots to work on then. I am a mom. I do love God. Most important things in my life. So that's staying. :-) It's entirely up to you. But you asked, hihi. I don't do BS ratings. And a good profile does require some work and thought. I didn't mean removing the bit about being a mom and loving God because that's important to you. It's just that right now it's the first thing you say that's truly about you. And a man isn't looking for a mom, but a woman, a lover, a partner. |
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Yeah it's grand. My favourite pic is the black/white one, btw
But would you be able to use paragraphs? Not important, just makes it a wee easier to read |
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Edited by
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Thu 06/11/20 04:37 AM
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To be honest... the start is weird, redundant and the whole thing can be more compact and thus easier and nicer to read. Also, get rid of the red screaming "Will tell you later" under Interests. Don't write a tome in there, but say something at least. Now WILL TELL YOU LATER is the first thing someone sees and they're likely off. I am not a superhero or a saint. = subconsciously knocking yourself The whole "Who needs food ... people call me" is redundant. Goes for everyone. So first you lower yourself, continue to make a bland statement, then there's "I'm a mom and I love God". Not a great start. Then "Looking to see who's out there"... Makes me feel like DEEEUHHH!!! EVERYONE on a dating site is. Redundant and pointless. Why not write a better beginning, something positive about yourself and what kind of woman you are. And dare to be bold, don't put your foot into clichés! The rest is I love, I love, I love, I love, I love. Pfff.... I got tired after 3 of those. Condense it. You can say all these things in a much clearer and fun to read way. TELL it -more like a short story-, don't make an "I love" summary out of it. And leave some of them out as it's an overload of info. Hmmm welll lots to work on then. I am a mom. I do love God. Most important things in my life. So that's staying. :-) It's entirely up to you. But you asked, hihi. I don't do BS ratings. And a good profile does require some work and thought. I didn't mean removing the bit about being a mom and loving God because that's important to you. It's just that right now it's the first thing you say that's truly about you. And a man isn't looking for a mom, but a woman, a lover, a partner. And i sure dont want to be a grown mans mom lol. Kinda why the weird start i guess. My marriage i was held to this extremely high standard. Felt more like a mom to a grown man and felt neglected of just the basic everyday needs. I wasnt a partner or a lover. Oh forgot about the woman i am outside of being a wife and a mom. Those things are important roles but there's still Carrie. That likes going out. That loves fishing, festivals, art, travel......... It didnt matter what i needed or even loved. Lol |
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Edited by
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Thu 06/11/20 04:29 AM
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Yeah it's grand. My favourite pic is the black/white one, btw But would you be able to use paragraphs? Not important, just makes it a wee easier to read With my nerd glasses. Lol i actually love those glasses but the lenses transition and i hate that. I tried getting rid of my glasses but putting contacts in was horrible and my vision wasnt as good because my astigmatism is so damn bad. Lol |
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Yeah it's grand. My favourite pic is the black/white one, btw But would you be able to use paragraphs? Not important, just makes it a wee easier to read With my nerd glasses. Lol i actually love those glasses but the lenses transition and i hate that. I tried getting rid of my glasses but putting contacts in was horrible and my vision wasnt as good because my astigmatism is so damn bad. Lol I was looking at the camo top though, lol |
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Edited by
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Thu 06/11/20 04:42 AM
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Yeah it's grand. My favourite pic is the black/white one, btw But would you be able to use paragraphs? Not important, just makes it a wee easier to read With my nerd glasses. Lol i actually love those glasses but the lenses transition and i hate that. I tried getting rid of my glasses but putting contacts in was horrible and my vision wasnt as good because my astigmatism is so damn bad. Lol I was looking at the camo top though, lol Lol i have a thing for the army camo. I just ordered a cold shoulder army camo print shirt off amazon. It had good reviews so hopefully it wont disappoint. |
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