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Topic: Poetic duel?
manDii's photo
Wed 11/01/06 07:59 PM
YOUR A DEE DEE DEE!

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:00 PM
i never said i wasnt lol

manDii's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:01 PM
LMFAO

escapedlunatic's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:11 PM
Quiet knaves for the king doth aproach,
and in every breath his harshness is spoke,
and the fools that dare tsngle with his words,
get bashed like fools do.

I so glad to see this lady so witty so pretty,

manDii's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:12 PM
thumbs up! i give it a 9.9

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:12 PM
ohhh bad,
if jello's on you
i won't be mad
i'll be on it like glue
but could you go with a plaid?
instead of something blue?
cuz you they call "BAD"
go and bring forth something NEW!

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:16 PM
i feel like were in a bad dr seuss book

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:17 PM
*looks around for a king*

there's a king in here?
im sorry i don't see where
is he the one wiping the tear?
it must be him over there *points*

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:19 PM
that lacked all rhytm and had no rhyme
please stop oh dear stop
your commiting a crime! To join in this duel you must come correct,
another rhyme like that u lose that state check!

manDii's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:20 PM
and the ref will disqualify i gotta keep this one in check lol

escapedlunatic's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:25 PM
Elgee i'd give you credit if credit were do,
but sweety this had nothing to do with you,
but i'll tell you this from those rymes you show it,
baby this aint for you ...the sign say POETS

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:26 PM
*sigh*

you're still thinkin you're the best
and the spotlight's on you so to speak
must not see that target on your chest
cuz honey your rymes are just weak :P

lmao

manDii's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:26 PM
OH SNAP lol

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:30 PM
just look at the posts!
Six pages of 'em all cheezy
just like the 80's sitcom goes
im movin up like George N' Weezie!!

lmfao

manDii's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:32 PM
and the ref. finally decided the winner if you would like to know just
speak out lol

escapedlunatic's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:34 PM
Its about time someone showed up with class,
oh look nevermind the kept driving past,
you can match words thats simple to see,
but you aint got what it takes to beat someone like me.

manDii's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:36 PM
lunatic u need to teach me some tricks lol

DaBadGuy4U's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:40 PM

writing sad weepy shit is what u do best
and theres more than a target thats on this guys chest, you walked into
this game and tried to bust game. read back what youve written one word
for it lame. Im sorry dont take that like i think of you less but your
rippin and rhymin is really a mess. my son could do better and hes only
10 ill send his raps, you study, try again.
So save all that weak shit I dont think your a bitch
Just be a good girl and MAKE ME A SANDWICH!!!

escapedlunatic's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:41 PM
ohhhhhhhhhhh

manDii's photo
Wed 11/01/06 08:41 PM
ouch

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