Topic: Poetic duel? | |
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YOUR A DEE DEE DEE!
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i never said i wasnt lol
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LMFAO
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Quiet knaves for the king doth aproach,
and in every breath his harshness is spoke, and the fools that dare tsngle with his words, get bashed like fools do. I so glad to see this lady so witty so pretty, |
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thumbs up! i give it a 9.9
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ohhh bad,
if jello's on you i won't be mad i'll be on it like glue but could you go with a plaid? instead of something blue? cuz you they call "BAD" go and bring forth something NEW! |
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i feel like were in a bad dr seuss book
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*looks around for a king*
there's a king in here? im sorry i don't see where is he the one wiping the tear? it must be him over there *points* |
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that lacked all rhytm and had no rhyme
please stop oh dear stop your commiting a crime! To join in this duel you must come correct, another rhyme like that u lose that state check! |
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and the ref will disqualify i gotta keep this one in check lol
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Elgee i'd give you credit if credit were do,
but sweety this had nothing to do with you, but i'll tell you this from those rymes you show it, baby this aint for you ...the sign say POETS |
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*sigh*
you're still thinkin you're the best and the spotlight's on you so to speak must not see that target on your chest cuz honey your rymes are just weak :P lmao |
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OH SNAP lol
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just look at the posts!
Six pages of 'em all cheezy just like the 80's sitcom goes im movin up like George N' Weezie!! lmfao |
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and the ref. finally decided the winner if you would like to know just
speak out lol |
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Its about time someone showed up with class,
oh look nevermind the kept driving past, you can match words thats simple to see, but you aint got what it takes to beat someone like me. |
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lunatic u need to teach me some tricks lol
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writing sad weepy shit is what u do best and theres more than a target thats on this guys chest, you walked into this game and tried to bust game. read back what youve written one word for it lame. Im sorry dont take that like i think of you less but your rippin and rhymin is really a mess. my son could do better and hes only 10 ill send his raps, you study, try again. So save all that weak shit I dont think your a bitch Just be a good girl and MAKE ME A SANDWICH!!! |
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ohhhhhhhhhhh
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ouch
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