Topic: Neurotica (rev)
ArtGurl's photo
Thu 11/27/08 10:19 PM

<<----helping self to popcorn munch munch munch...Nope. No sympathy here ....devil


<-------- watches in bewildered curiosity ...



Well they don't put up much of a fight do they?

...and they seem to stun easily

Do you suppose they are indicitive of the male species or just particularly prone to eyelashes?

huh

kc0003's photo
Thu 11/27/08 10:52 PM


<<----helping self to popcorn munch munch munch...Nope. No sympathy here ....devil


<-------- watches in bewildered curiosity ...



Well they don't put up much of a fight do they?

...and they seem to stun easily

Do you suppose they are indicitive of the male species or just particularly prone to eyelashes?

huh




it's the eyelashes and the inabillity to say know to cherry popsicles...(what is it about cherries)(maybe a guy thing)...and why does it take incarceration to see that this wizard has more teath than tail?...and now to be teased with popcorn that we can't have...:angry:

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 11/27/08 10:58 PM



<<----helping self to popcorn munch munch munch...Nope. No sympathy here ....devil


<-------- watches in bewildered curiosity ...



Well they don't put up much of a fight do they?

...and they seem to stun easily

Do you suppose they are indicitive of the male species or just particularly prone to eyelashes?

huh




it's the eyelashes and the inabillity to say know to cherry popsicles...(what is it about cherries)(maybe a guy thing)...and why does it take incarceration to see that this wizard has more teath than tail?...and now to be teased with popcorn that we can't have...:angry:


Don't tell the lovely wizard ohwell

***rolls the top of the bag down and tosses the remaining popcorn into the cell*** :angel:




























***wonders if they realize the salt will make them thirsty*** devil

kc0003's photo
Thu 11/27/08 11:01 PM




<<----helping self to popcorn munch munch munch...Nope. No sympathy here ....devil


<-------- watches in bewildered curiosity ...



Well they don't put up much of a fight do they?

...and they seem to stun easily

Do you suppose they are indicitive of the male species or just particularly prone to eyelashes?

huh




it's the eyelashes and the inabillity to say know to cherry popsicles...(what is it about cherries)(maybe a guy thing)...and why does it take incarceration to see that this wizard has more teath than tail?...and now to be teased with popcorn that we can't have...:angry:


Don't tell the lovely wizard ohwell

***rolls the top of the bag down and tosses the remaining popcorn into the cell*** :angel:




























***wonders if they realize the salt will make them thirsty*** devil



knew there had to be a motive...and here i thought maybe you had a soft spot for us...

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 11/27/08 11:06 PM


knew there had to be a motive...and here i thought maybe you had a soft spot for us...



I do :angel: .... but I don't want to disappoint the lovely wizard ... I must not show compassion frustrated ... I must not show compassion frustrated ... I must not show compassion ... frustrated

devil



kc0003's photo
Thu 11/27/08 11:19 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Thu 11/27/08 11:26 PM



knew there had to be a motive...and here i thought maybe you had a soft spot for us...



I do :angel: .... but I don't want to disappoint the lovely wizard ... I must not show compassion frustrated ... I must not show compassion frustrated ... I must not show compassion ... frustrated

devil






no, by all means show it...i'm sure you will find the accomodations to your liking...besides i would rather share a cell with you than these guys devil



ArtGurl's photo
Thu 11/27/08 11:27 PM
Edited by ArtGurl on Thu 11/27/08 11:28 PM




knew there had to be a motive...and here i thought maybe you had a soft spot for us...



I do :angel: .... but I don't want to disappoint the lovely wizard ... I must not show compassion frustrated ... I must not show compassion frustrated ... I must not show compassion ... frustrated

devil






no, by all means show it...i'm sure you will find the accomodations to your liking...besides i would rather share a cell with than these other guys devil






ohhhhh noooooooooo .... I'm not getting locked up ... I'm the sidekick ... every heroine needs a moderately cool Canadian sidekick ... this is MY gig! :tongue:

AllenAqua's photo
Fri 11/28/08 06:29 AM
<-- fashions a make-do key out out popsickle sticks,sneaks stealthly down to village magic store, buys love potion #9, sneaks back to cell with contraband and waits for right time to spring well concieved plot. heheheh...

hopefulhoffman's photo
Fri 11/28/08 06:45 AM
all i can say to that is wow!you spend to much time podering the negative and not enough time injoy the positive.in a world where we can be what ever we choose.why choose to look apon our selves in a negative state.as far as being naurotic.we are in some ways all naurotic.its a human trate.but yet we choose to control the level we have by the method we live by.just an opinion.but reading the peom i just read if i saw my self like that i would be in a constant state of depresion.wow!

hopefulhoffman's photo
Fri 11/28/08 06:46 AM
and i spelt the word neurotica wronge because i refuse to let the labbles life offers.control the way i see or feel about my self.

captaincliff's photo
Fri 11/28/08 08:08 AM
It's depressing to see spelling that poor..er..poer. Allen, wake up from your dream state..popsicle sticks into makeshift key? I held my nose I took a drink...love potion #9....actually was catchy tune.......As for male species and inherent weakness: batting eyelashes+ cherry popsicle+ popcorn= deep state of hypersuggestibility (and strong desire for Margarita). I beg u NOT to put on cellblock speakers and play Macarena.....cant bear to see these guys getting into it. Of the lake...great line...welcome to virtual Alcatraz.

no photo
Fri 11/28/08 09:58 AM




<<----helping self to popcorn munch munch munch...Nope. No sympathy here ....devil


<-------- watches in bewildered curiosity ...



Well they don't put up much of a fight do they?

...and they seem to stun easily

Do you suppose they are indicitive of the male species or just particularly prone to eyelashes?

huh




it's the eyelashes and the inabillity to say know to cherry popsicles...(what is it about cherries)(maybe a guy thing)...and why does it take incarceration to see that this wizard has more teath than tail?...and now to be teased with popcorn that we can't have...:angry:


Don't tell the lovely wizard ohwell

***rolls the top of the bag down and tosses the remaining popcorn into the cell*** :angel:




























***wonders if they realize the salt will make them thirsty*** devil


Im wondering if they realize those popsicles were made with sea salt? bigsmile

no photo
Fri 11/28/08 09:58 AM



<<----helping self to popcorn munch munch munch...Nope. No sympathy here ....devil


<-------- watches in bewildered curiosity ...



Well they don't put up much of a fight do they?

...and they seem to stun easily

Do you suppose they are indicitive of the male species or just particularly prone to eyelashes?

huh




it's the eyelashes and the inabillity to say know to cherry popsicles...(what is it about cherries)(maybe a guy thing)...and why does it take incarceration to see that this wizard has more teath than tail?...and now to be teased with popcorn that we can't have...:angry:


<<--------Has new bag of snickers bars to tempt captives with...

no photo
Fri 11/28/08 09:59 AM



knew there had to be a motive...and here i thought maybe you had a soft spot for us...



I do :angel: .... but I don't want to disappoint the lovely wizard ... I must not show compassion frustrated ... I must not show compassion frustrated ... I must not show compassion ... frustrated

devil





Stand strong Missy! United we stand, divided we fall! No compassion No compassion No compa....

no photo
Fri 11/28/08 10:00 AM

<-- fashions a make-do key out out popsickle sticks,sneaks stealthly down to village magic store, buys love potion #9, sneaks back to cell with contraband and waits for right time to spring well concieved plot. heheheh...


<<<-----------------------has motion sensored camera and is well prepared for "well conceived plot"

Tuck4x4's photo
Fri 11/28/08 10:03 AM
Neurotic,
lost in your own pyschotic,
self flagellation inhibits you,
but someone will see you as exotic.

Personal dislike and hatred cloud your mirror,
hiding from you the person that other see.
The power comes from learning to feel free,
to be,
to liking your me.

Scars become bars that hold you in and keep others out.
no doubt.

But life deals pain and pain teaches character,
And character makes you lovely.

You'll see.

no photo
Fri 11/28/08 10:06 AM
Edited by MsWizard on Fri 11/28/08 10:06 AM

all i can say to that is wow!you spend to much time podering the negative and not enough time injoy the positive.in a world where we can be what ever we choose.why choose to look apon our selves in a negative state.as far as being naurotic.we are in some ways all naurotic.its a human trate.but yet we choose to control the level we have by the method we live by.just an opinion.but reading the peom i just read if i saw my self like that i would be in a constant state of depresion.wow!


All I can say to YOU is that if you pondered this piece with a bit of depth and an open mind, you'd find that it's the ponderings of a woman, this woman in particular, of all the things life has offered that has affected her with. You would ALSO note that this is clearly not a negative view of myself, but rather a questioning, an awakening and an acceptance of myself before and currently. You are very clearly not an indepth thinker.

In addition you can't spell for ****.

You misspelled neurotic
Trate SHOULD be spelled trait
Depresion SHOULD be spelled depression
Wronge SHOULD be spelled wrong
Podering SHOULD be spelled pondering

If I were you rather than pondering the words of writing that you will obviously NEVER understand, try pondering the purchase of a dictionary. WOW.

captaincliff's photo
Sat 11/29/08 07:04 AM
ok, the dumbell with the dumbbells deserved it but, "Leave Britney..err I mean Tuck alone!!!"..i sense he is sincere in his admittedly sophomoric prose...and plus I like his cool oversized manwatch. I have first dibs on it!!! Damn these popsicles just make me want more, not to mention pee like a racehorse for some reason...Artgurl, u pandering wizardress in waiting,could u go to the store and pick us up some more popsicles, popcorn, 54 lotto tickets, umm...oh,hey did someone mention Snickers?? I love Snickers!!

no photo
Sat 11/29/08 08:50 AM
Edited by MsWizard on Sat 11/29/08 08:55 AM

ok, the dumbell with the dumbbells deserved it but, "Leave Britney..err I mean Tuck alone!!!"..i sense he is sincere in his admittedly sophomoric prose...and plus I like his cool oversized manwatch. I have first dibs on it!!! Damn these popsicles just make me want more, not to mention pee like a racehorse for some reason...Artgurl, u pandering wizardress in waiting,could u go to the store and pick us up some more popsicles, popcorn, 54 lotto tickets, umm...oh,hey did someone mention Snickers?? I love Snickers!!


The guy with the dumbells is clearly a proven point when it comes to all brawn and no brain...just saying...as for the one with the prose, well, I rather like it myself so you can keep the watch however you DO know what they say about men with oversized manwatches dont you? Hmmmm......

Hey, hey, hey, don't you be askin my cool Canadian Sidekick Wizardess in training to fetch you anything! That's MY job!

Hey GorgeousGurl, think we ought to feed these critters some saltwater taffy?


no photo
Sat 11/29/08 08:52 AM


<<----helping self to popcorn munch munch munch...Nope. No sympathy here ....devil


<-------- watches in bewildered curiosity ...



Well they don't put up much of a fight do they?

...and they seem to stun easily

Do you suppose they are indicitive of the male species or just particularly prone to eyelashes?

huh



Indicative of the species AND they are particularly prone to eyelashes...rather visual creatures are they not? Gimme some more popcorn please, I need to study these specimens....