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You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time! Choosing popsicles over women are we???? 
Come 'ere you ..... <<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ... 
hey Mano...long time no see.... Been recrueted....cool.. Hope all is well with you... 
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You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time! Choosing popsicles over women are we????
Come 'ere you ..... <<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
hey Mano...long time no see.... Been recrueted....cool.. Hope all is well with you...
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You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time! Choosing popsicles over women are we????
Come 'ere you ..... <<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
hey Mano...long time no see.... Been recrueted....cool.. Hope all is well with you...
I'm surviving..thanks for asking.Brett is in Iraq and Brad is at college....my world has changed drastically..but I am still standing....most days...lol Glad to hear all is well with you. I stopped in the other sight the other night.Got to say hi to Ron.That was nice. Have fun..thia is a nice site.. see u around...  
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If u guys are going to mess with the recommended attire for lunatic space travel, what is next, Hooter's shorts and those nylons?... and for who..not me babe! This is EXACTLY why hippies and anarchists never form huge armies or bureaucracies...they all want to be different!  
<------- does not like uniforms or uniformity
<<-----------Oh SO definitely NOT a fan of uniformity or herds 
Agreed!!!! Unless, of course, a bowl of Hershey's chocolate kisses can be considered a herd ... in that case I will have to modify my stance on herds ... 
Get the lady a popsicle dammit!!! 
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You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time! Choosing popsicles over women are we????
Come 'ere you ..... <<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
hey Mano...long time no see.... Been recrueted....cool.. Hope all is well with you...
I'm surviving..thanks for asking.Brett is in Iraq and Brad is at college....my world has changed drastically..but I am still standing....most days...lol Glad to hear all is well with you. I stopped in the other sight the other night.Got to say hi to Ron.That was nice. Have fun..thia is a nice site.. see u around...
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You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time! Choosing popsicles over women are we????
I saw that each time I popped in....thats sad..alot of nice ppl that we have known for a long time... I'll check it out...but I have always had a hard time navigating that site unfortunately.. guess I was on long enough to learn.. hey were did everyones pics go....??
Come 'ere you ..... <<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
hey Mano...long time no see.... Been recrueted....cool.. Hope all is well with you...
I'm surviving..thanks for asking.Brett is in Iraq and Brad is at college....my world has changed drastically..but I am still standing....most days...lol Glad to hear all is well with you. I stopped in the other sight the other night.Got to say hi to Ron.That was nice. Have fun..thia is a nice site.. see u around...
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wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
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wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise? |
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wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise? 
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wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head? <<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach
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wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head? <<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach
 ...you know that's my "best feature" 
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Very nice
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Standing naked and exposed my skin crawling with irritation. I look in the mirror Blank Stricken as I struggle with hesitation Oh, such imperfection I see, so marred and scarred by my convoluted life Does that face really belong to me? Lined and faded by such strife . Chaotic, sad A scared little girl Lost inside a woman aged and grown Can I let her out to play once again? Or is she too young To be left alone In a big bad world often cruel to an anatomical tenement long inhabited and too well worn to be viewed as a fresh and passion compelling exotica I spend the long harsh hours mentally chewing me up and spitting me out Welcome! To my Neurotica 
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wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head? <<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach
...you know that's my "best feature"
And a lovely hair it is...ooops, a lovely head of hair. Really. blink blink blink 
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Very nice
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Standing naked and exposed my skin crawling with irritation. I look in the mirror Blank Stricken as I struggle with hesitation Oh, such imperfection I see, so marred and scarred by my convoluted life Does that face really belong to me? Lined and faded by such strife . Chaotic, sad A scared little girl Lost inside a woman aged and grown Can I let her out to play once again? Or is she too young To be left alone In a big bad world often cruel to an anatomical tenement long inhabited and too well worn to be viewed as a fresh and passion compelling exotica I spend the long harsh hours mentally chewing me up and spitting me out Welcome! To my Neurotica
Thank you for that well worded comment. |
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Standing naked and exposed my skin crawling with irritation. I look in the mirror Blank Stricken as I struggle with hesitation Oh, such imperfection I see, so marred and scarred by my convoluted life Does that face really belong to me? Lined and faded by such strife . Chaotic, sad A scared little girl Lost inside a woman aged and grown Can I let her out to play once again? Or is she too young To be left alone In a big bad world often cruel to an anatomical tenement long inhabited and too well worn to be viewed as a fresh and passion compelling exotica I spend the long harsh hours mentally chewing me up and spitting me out Welcome! To my Neurotica
Thank you for that well worded comment. Ok, maybe I should have made a real comment or not bothered so I apologize. I did find your writing very strong and reading it gave me a tingle up my back because it was so starkly open and honest. The meter was flowing and without stumbles, so it allows the reader to absorb the darkness of the context. I liked it very much for it's openess and it's creativity, and I wasn't repulsed or anything, yet the poem did point me inwardly to a place I don't want to go...If that makes sense... Sorry again for short changing ya...
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Mon 11/24/08 06:39 PM
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Standing naked and exposed my skin crawling with irritation. I look in the mirror Blank Stricken as I struggle with hesitation Oh, such imperfection I see, so marred and scarred by my convoluted life Does that face really belong to me? Lined and faded by such strife . Chaotic, sad A scared little girl Lost inside a woman aged and grown Can I let her out to play once again? Or is she too young To be left alone In a big bad world often cruel to an anatomical tenement long inhabited and too well worn to be viewed as a fresh and passion compelling exotica I spend the long harsh hours mentally chewing me up and spitting me out Welcome! To my Neurotica
Thank you for that well worded comment. Ok, maybe I should have made a real comment or not bothered so I apologize. I did find your writing very strong and reading it gave me a tingle up my back because it was so starkly open and honest. The meter was flowing and without stumbles, so it allows the reader to absorb the darkness of the context. I liked it very much for it's openess and it's creativity, and I wasn't repulsed or anything, yet the poem did point me inwardly to a place I don't want to go...If that makes sense... Sorry again for short changing ya...
No worries. I was just a bit taken aback, not insulted. I appreicae your comments, Allen. Most of my work is pretty much emotional blood letting as you will probably find out. It's pretty much the only way I know how to write. Anyway, thanks again and welcome to Mingle. |
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wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head? <<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach
...you know that's my "best feature"
And a lovely hair it is...ooops, a lovely head of hair. Really. blink blink blink
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wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head? <<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach
...you know that's my "best feature"
And a lovely hair it is...ooops, a lovely head of hair. Really. blink blink blink
Oh hush. You know you love me
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