Topic: Neurotica (rev)
zanne46's photo
Sun 11/23/08 01:21 PM





You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!


Choosing popsicles over women are we????
He sounds like a very smart man bigsmile


grumble

Come 'ere you .....

<<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
ooooo....that hurts so gooOOood...tongue2


hey Mano...long time no see....

Been recrueted....cool..

Hope all is well with you...

:smile:

no photo
Sun 11/23/08 01:30 PM






You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!


Choosing popsicles over women are we????
He sounds like a very smart man bigsmile


grumble

Come 'ere you .....

<<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
ooooo....that hurts so gooOOood...tongue2


hey Mano...long time no see....

Been recrueted....cool..

Hope all is well with you...

:smile:
Hey Zanne, how are you doing? Great I hope. All is well with me...

zanne46's photo
Sun 11/23/08 01:35 PM







You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!


Choosing popsicles over women are we????
He sounds like a very smart man bigsmile


grumble

Come 'ere you .....

<<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
ooooo....that hurts so gooOOood...tongue2


hey Mano...long time no see....

Been recrueted....cool..

Hope all is well with you...

:smile:
Hey Zanne, how are you doing? Great I hope. All is well with me...


I'm surviving..thanks for asking.Brett is in Iraq and Brad is at college....my world has changed drastically..but I am still standing....most days...lol

Glad to hear all is well with you.

I stopped in the other sight the other night.Got to say hi to Ron.That was nice.

Have fun..thia is a nice site..

see u around...:banana: flowers :smile:

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Sun 11/23/08 01:35 PM




If u guys are going to mess with the recommended attire for lunatic space travel, what is next, Hooter's shorts and those nylons?... and for who..not me babe! This is EXACTLY why hippies and anarchists never form huge armies or bureaucracies...they all want to be different!:banana: frustrated ohwell



<------- does not like uniforms or uniformity bigsmile



<<-----------Oh SO definitely NOT a fan of uniformity or herds devil



Agreed!!!!


Unless, of course, a bowl of Hershey's chocolate kisses can be considered a herd ... in that case I will have to modify my stance on herds ... blushing



Get the lady a popsicle dammit!!! rant
uhhhh...can we have those kisses with almonds ??flowerforyou pleezzee...

no photo
Sun 11/23/08 01:37 PM








You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!


Choosing popsicles over women are we????
He sounds like a very smart man bigsmile


grumble

Come 'ere you .....

<<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
ooooo....that hurts so gooOOood...tongue2


hey Mano...long time no see....

Been recrueted....cool..

Hope all is well with you...

:smile:
Hey Zanne, how are you doing? Great I hope. All is well with me...


I'm surviving..thanks for asking.Brett is in Iraq and Brad is at college....my world has changed drastically..but I am still standing....most days...lol

Glad to hear all is well with you.

I stopped in the other sight the other night.Got to say hi to Ron.That was nice.

Have fun..thia is a nice site..

see u around...:banana: flowers :smile:
You need to spend more time at LMAO, it's getting awfully slow there frown

zanne46's photo
Sun 11/23/08 01:40 PM









You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!


Choosing popsicles over women are we????
He sounds like a very smart man bigsmile


I saw that each time I popped in....thats sad..alot of nice ppl that we have known for a long time...

I'll check it out...but I have always had a hard time navigating that site unfortunately..

guess I was on long enough to learn..

hey were did everyones pics go....??

grumble

Come 'ere you .....

<<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...
ooooo....that hurts so gooOOood...tongue2


hey Mano...long time no see....

Been recrueted....cool..

Hope all is well with you...

:smile:
Hey Zanne, how are you doing? Great I hope. All is well with me...


I'm surviving..thanks for asking.Brett is in Iraq and Brad is at college....my world has changed drastically..but I am still standing....most days...lol

Glad to hear all is well with you.

I stopped in the other sight the other night.Got to say hi to Ron.That was nice.

Have fun..thia is a nice site..

see u around...:banana: flowers :smile:
You need to spend more time at LMAO, it's getting awfully slow there frown

captaincliff's photo
Mon 11/24/08 09:06 AM
wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 11/24/08 09:13 AM

wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
Raven lunacy, perhaps?

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 01:48 PM

wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
hmmmmm...almond allergy....maybe that's why I'm losing the hair on my legs surprised

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 01:58 PM


wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
hmmmmm...almond allergy....maybe that's why I'm losing the hair on my legs surprised


Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head?

<<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach bigsmile

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 03:39 PM



wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
hmmmmm...almond allergy....maybe that's why I'm losing the hair on my legs surprised


Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head?

<<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach bigsmile
HEY :angry: ...you know that's my "best feature" :tongue:

MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 11/24/08 04:35 PM
flowerforyou Very niceflowerforyou

AllenAqua's photo
Mon 11/24/08 04:51 PM

Standing naked
and exposed
my skin crawling
with irritation.
I look in the mirror
Blank
Stricken
as I struggle
with hesitation

Oh, such imperfection
I see, so
marred and scarred
by my convoluted life
Does that face really
belong to me?
Lined and faded
by such strife
.
Chaotic, sad
A scared little girl
Lost
inside a woman aged
and grown
Can I let her out
to play once again?
Or is she too young
To be left alone
In a big bad world
often cruel
to an anatomical tenement
long inhabited
and too well worn
to be viewed as
a fresh and
passion compelling
exotica

I spend the long
harsh hours
mentally chewing
me up and
spitting me out

Welcome!
To my
Neurotica



scared

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 05:01 PM




wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
hmmmmm...almond allergy....maybe that's why I'm losing the hair on my legs surprised


Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head?

<<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach bigsmile
HEY :angry: ...you know that's my "best feature" :tongue:


And a lovely hair it is...ooops, a lovely head of hair. Really. blink blink blink

bigsmile :heart:

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 05:01 PM

flowerforyou Very niceflowerforyou


:heart:

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 05:02 PM


Standing naked
and exposed
my skin crawling
with irritation.
I look in the mirror
Blank
Stricken
as I struggle
with hesitation

Oh, such imperfection
I see, so
marred and scarred
by my convoluted life
Does that face really
belong to me?
Lined and faded
by such strife
.
Chaotic, sad
A scared little girl
Lost
inside a woman aged
and grown
Can I let her out
to play once again?
Or is she too young
To be left alone
In a big bad world
often cruel
to an anatomical tenement
long inhabited
and too well worn
to be viewed as
a fresh and
passion compelling
exotica

I spend the long
harsh hours
mentally chewing
me up and
spitting me out

Welcome!
To my
Neurotica



scared


Thank you for that well worded comment.

AllenAqua's photo
Mon 11/24/08 06:16 PM



Standing naked
and exposed
my skin crawling
with irritation.
I look in the mirror
Blank
Stricken
as I struggle
with hesitation

Oh, such imperfection
I see, so
marred and scarred
by my convoluted life
Does that face really
belong to me?
Lined and faded
by such strife
.
Chaotic, sad
A scared little girl
Lost
inside a woman aged
and grown
Can I let her out
to play once again?
Or is she too young
To be left alone
In a big bad world
often cruel
to an anatomical tenement
long inhabited
and too well worn
to be viewed as
a fresh and
passion compelling
exotica

I spend the long
harsh hours
mentally chewing
me up and
spitting me out

Welcome!
To my
Neurotica



scared


Thank you for that well worded comment.


Ok, maybe I should have made a real comment or not bothered so I apologize. I did find your writing very strong and reading it gave me a tingle up my back because it was so starkly open and honest. The meter was flowing and without stumbles, so it allows the reader to absorb the darkness of the context. I liked it very much for it's openess and it's creativity, and I wasn't repulsed or anything, yet the poem did point me inwardly to a place I don't want to go...If that makes sense...

Sorry again for short changing ya...flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 06:38 PM
Edited by MsWizard on Mon 11/24/08 06:39 PM




Standing naked
and exposed
my skin crawling
with irritation.
I look in the mirror
Blank
Stricken
as I struggle
with hesitation

Oh, such imperfection
I see, so
marred and scarred
by my convoluted life
Does that face really
belong to me?
Lined and faded
by such strife
.
Chaotic, sad
A scared little girl
Lost
inside a woman aged
and grown
Can I let her out
to play once again?
Or is she too young
To be left alone
In a big bad world
often cruel
to an anatomical tenement
long inhabited
and too well worn
to be viewed as
a fresh and
passion compelling
exotica

I spend the long
harsh hours
mentally chewing
me up and
spitting me out

Welcome!
To my
Neurotica



scared


Thank you for that well worded comment.


Ok, maybe I should have made a real comment or not bothered so I apologize. I did find your writing very strong and reading it gave me a tingle up my back because it was so starkly open and honest. The meter was flowing and without stumbles, so it allows the reader to absorb the darkness of the context. I liked it very much for it's openess and it's creativity, and I wasn't repulsed or anything, yet the poem did point me inwardly to a place I don't want to go...If that makes sense...

Sorry again for short changing ya...flowerforyou


No worries. I was just a bit taken aback, not insulted. I appreicae your comments, Allen. Most of my work is pretty much emotional blood letting as you will probably find out. It's pretty much the only way I know how to write. Anyway, thanks again and welcome to Mingle.

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 06:50 PM





wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
hmmmmm...almond allergy....maybe that's why I'm losing the hair on my legs surprised


Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head?

<<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach bigsmile
HEY :angry: ...you know that's my "best feature" :tongue:


And a lovely hair it is...ooops, a lovely head of hair. Really. blink blink blink

bigsmile :heart:
one of these days I'm gonna "blink blink" you grumble

no photo
Mon 11/24/08 07:03 PM






wow...the good humor man must have gone into a fugue state...i missed most of your orders...cherry popsicles aplenty, a cluster of hershey kisses....hmmm..with almonds? u got a note from your mother that u are almond allergy free? My liability insurance covers most things, but not death by almond allergy anaphylaxis. Agreed? What is that incessant tapping noise?
hmmmmm...almond allergy....maybe that's why I'm losing the hair on my legs surprised


Yes but what is causing you to lose all that hair on your head?

<<---------------running at turbo speed out of his reach bigsmile
HEY :angry: ...you know that's my "best feature" :tongue:


And a lovely hair it is...ooops, a lovely head of hair. Really. blink blink blink

bigsmile :heart:
one of these days I'm gonna "blink blink" you grumble


Oh hush. You know you love me bigsmile :heart: