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Topic: Neurotica (rev)
no photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:09 PM
Standing naked
and exposed
my skin crawling
with irritation.
I look in the mirror
Blank
Stricken
as I struggle
with hesitation

Oh, such imperfection
I see, so
marred and scarred
by my convoluted life
Does that face really
belong to me?
Lined and faded
by such strife
.
Chaotic, sad
A scared little girl
Lost
inside a woman aged
and grown
Can I let her out
to play once again?
Or is she too young
To be left alone
In a big bad world
often cruel
to an anatomical tenement
long inhabited
and too well worn
to be viewed as
a fresh and
passion compelling
exotica

I spend the long
harsh hours
mentally chewing
me up and
spitting me out

Welcome!
To my
Neurotica

beauty314's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:20 PM
i am so there..beautiful:heart:

no photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:27 PM
can this be like a workshop.. i'm compelled to make my own version...

:heart: flowers


kc0003's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:27 PM
let her out!!!!!

play like your about to be called in for dinner...
red rover,
red rover,
send alica on over...


:heart:


no photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:30 PM

i am so there..beautiful:heart:


Thank you darling~ have I mentioned that I adore your new picture? :heart:

no photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:31 PM

can this be like a workshop.. i'm compelled to make my own version...

:heart: flowers




Go for it precious! My neurotica is YOUR neurotica (wink wink) :heart:

no photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:32 PM

let her out!!!!!

play like your about to be called in for dinner...
red rover,
red rover,
send alica on over...


:heart:




I got my muddy boots on and a popcicle smile, is that ok??? :heart:

s1owhand's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:35 PM
Edited by s1owhand on Tue 11/18/08 08:42 PM
Play....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WeekJ_KK5ig

bigsmile

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:39 PM


let her out!!!!!

play like your about to be called in for dinner...
red rover,
red rover,
send alica on over...


:heart:




I got my muddy boots on and a popcicle smile, is that ok??? :heart:


yes perfect...bigsmile

s1owhand's photo
Tue 11/18/08 08:46 PM
"And indeed there will be time
To wonder, “Do I dare?” and, “Do I dare?”
Time to turn back and descend the stair,
With a bald spot in the middle of my hair -
[They will say: “How his hair is growing thin!”]
My morning coat, my collar mounting firmly to the chin,
My necktie rich and modest, but asserted by a simple pin—
[They will say: “But how his arms and legs are thin!”]
Do I dare
Disturb the universe?
In a minute there is time
For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse."

flowerforyou :heart:

AngelLight's photo
Wed 11/19/08 09:06 AM
Incredible write flowerforyou


For beautiful you! :heart: flowers :heart:

no photo
Wed 11/19/08 10:09 AM
awesome!!

We all feel this at some point but you know as well as I do, the words compelling and passion... you exude this in your very being. :heart: bigsmile

frankfk's photo
Wed 11/19/08 10:25 AM
sensational and penetrating, keep it good work wiz:wink: flowerforyou
Standing naked
and exposed
my skin crawling
with irritation.
I look in the mirror
Blank
Stricken
as I struggle
with hesitation

Oh, such imperfection
I see, so
marred and scarred
by my convoluted life
Does that face really
belong to me?
Lined and faded
by such strife
.
Chaotic, sad
A scared little girl
Lost
inside a woman aged
and grown
Can I let her out
to play once again?
Or is she too young
To be left alone
In a big bad world
often cruel
to an anatomical tenement
long inhabited
and too well worn
to be viewed as
a fresh and
passion compelling
exotica

I spend the long
harsh hours
mentally chewing
me up and
spitting me out

Welcome!
To my
Neurotica


LAMom's photo
Thu 11/20/08 07:38 AM
((( A ))) Ohhhhhhhh Darlin once again you have taken me to a place of long ago,,, Come lets if just for a moment
be all the Woman we are to be:heart:

no photo
Thu 11/20/08 02:08 PM

((( A ))) Ohhhhhhhh Darlin once again you have taken me to a place of long ago,,, Come lets if just for a moment
be all the Woman we are to be:heart:


<<----WORKING VERY HARD TO BE ALL THE WOMAN SHE CAN BE (and often failing miserably!) :heart:

captaincliff's photo
Thu 11/20/08 04:04 PM
You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!

no photo
Thu 11/20/08 04:38 PM

You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!


Choosing popsicles over women are we????

no photo
Fri 11/21/08 08:46 AM


You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!


Choosing popsicles over women are we????
He sounds like a very smart man bigsmile

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 11/21/08 08:51 AM

<<----WORKING VERY HARD TO BE ALL THE WOMAN SHE CAN BE (and often failing miserably!) :heart:



ditto sister! :heart:

no photo
Fri 11/21/08 10:06 AM



You guys can do the woman thing...did somebody mention popsicles? Cherry please! I think I hear the Good Humor Truck, a sound idea that makes me laugh and drool at the same time!


Choosing popsicles over women are we????
He sounds like a very smart man bigsmile


grumble

Come 'ere you .....

<<-----reaching out with long talons to give him a squeeze ...

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