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Casting Mettle
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Thanks for digging this one up and commenting, Robin & Julie.
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Swindled by Shepherds
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Awesome! What about the leaders who humiliate those stronger than them but below them, to prevent any threat to their authority? Thanks for having a look and sharing your thoughts, Lane. A bullies "leadership" has to be challenged to expose them as the weak phony they typically are. That's often the catalyst required to disarm the real threat, that being their mob of followers duped by fear and lies. |
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Prince Cory Nation
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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Yep, another great poem!!!! Your kind feedback is appreciated, mig. |
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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Brilliant!! Thanks for your feedback, Kendrill. |
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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Nice poem . Thanks, Julie. |
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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EXCELLENT Thanks, Robin. |
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Cal A. Mazu
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Topic:
Swindled by Shepherds
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Geriatric despots regurgitate
fairy tales ad nauseam, entombing pliable offspring to shrivel just like their crypt keeper faces. Pickling in the salty sweat of slaves for self preservation. Grifting spawn prod the coals and squint for diamonds. Their plastic faces may melt lurking near the pit, alongside neighbors roasting on the spit, the fatty drippings fuel their warped drive. Orphans swindled by shepherds; obey without inquiry or summon the ire of a charlatan! |
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Shirkhan Duit
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Kendal N. Hurfyre
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Abner Mali Wellindowed
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Olav U Rock
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Preston Herb Utten
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Warren T. Voyde
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Phil N. Thublancz
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N. E. Howe
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Topic:
My loves
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A wonderful expression of self-awareness, Ladywind.
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Topic:
Peasants Beneath the Hill
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Thanks for having a look, jaish. I'm gonna stick with my original version.
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Topic:
Peasants Beneath the Hill
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Very interesting perspective... That line "leaving dough for evening bread" gives a double meaning. Thanks for your feedback, Nick. |
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