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Discontented
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Very talented Your generous compliment is appreciated. |
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Thank ya's.
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First steps stamped
in sepia tone knee caps and elbows earned a break. Teen years darkening Kodachrome layers of clay spun into shape. Prom high vomits from a Polaroid slot rat racers launched from the starting gate. Instagram stories laid out by bots wild ones chose to assimilate. Cat memes and spam filling up phones portraits of how to domesticate. |
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Topic:
Discontented
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Thanks again guys.
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Topic:
Discontented
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I write to breathe
my painted scenes STRANGLED asphyxiate me. I pour to drink a vessel with no water desiccates me. I forage to eat trees without fruit starve me. I search for my seat finding no place at the table deflates me. |
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Nexus Shards
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The acknowledgement is appreciated ya'll.
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Topic:
Nexus Shards
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Crystalline bones
pulverized by two-fisted pestle blows, crushed into mortar. Straw men mud bricks, adobe, cemented together in galactic ancestry. Mountain movers plunging dynamite, buried under avalanching mothballs. Chiffon clad lumberjacks log-rolling a carpenters wooden chalice. Conjoined siblings torn apart by parchment scrolls and radioactivity. |
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Topic:
Guise
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A talented composition with a musical feel. A satisfying read.
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Topic:
Furnace of Fury
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Thanks guys.
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It's good to see you sharing here again, Ladywind. 
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Topic:
Furnace of Fury
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driven by the burning
my bellowing lungs stoke it a furnace of fury buried in the center of me flamethrower on standby inside a bipedal motion machine |
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Your "zombies going extinct" line gave me an idea for a piece of creative writing to share, though in a rather different direction. 
Thanks for checking it out. |
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Conan Sven Dell
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B. L. Zibub
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Lou Siffer
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Gaze Upon Giza
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Bravo! 
A beautiful read. Your favorable appraisal is much appreciated, Merry. |
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Topic:
Gaze Upon Giza
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Your poem gave me great visualisations and I was right there in Giza. Enjoyed reading it very much!
superb
Thanks. |
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Gaze Upon Giza
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Nice poem  .
Appreciated, as always Julie. |
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Topic:
Gaze Upon Giza
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Your poem gave me great visualisations and I was right there in Giza. Enjoyed reading it very much! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Gaze Upon Giza
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Wow, amazing poem, Techno. I used to live/work in Giza (in Sheikh Zayed).
Thank you for the kind feedback. Ancient Egypt intrigues me, I hope to visit Giza someday. |
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