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Highly Sensitive
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Your poetry is art. You remind me of ladywind and Poppashroom. Thank you for inspiring me to write!!! That's a generous compliment, thanks mig. |
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Topic:
Highly Sensitive
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Bumping the door knob didn’t hurt, contact made me mad, not a pain. Storms dreary my windows in spurts, confinement makes me sad, not rain. Whirring wind fires my red alert, floods amp me up, not the drain. No olive branch for throaty blurts, bile burns my gut, not my brain. N  ICE ONE  Thanks, Robin. |
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Topic:
Highly Sensitive
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Intense. Thanks, Storm. |
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Topic:
Highly Sensitive
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Nice poem  . Thanks, Julie. |
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Topic:
Highly Sensitive
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Bumping the door knob didn’t hurt,
contact made me mad, not a pain. Storms dreary my windows in spurts, confinement makes me sad, not rain. Whirring wind fires my red alert, floods amp me up, not the drain. No olive branch for throaty blurts, bile burns my gut, not my brain. |
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Topic:
Not A Fairy Tale
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I appreciate the sweet sentiment you've expressed, CrazyBitsAsian.
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Topic:
Self Sustainability
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Family, stories that effectively portray the heart of being human, introspection, writing.
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Fisherman's Daybreak
Edited by
technovative
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Wed 05/15/24 04:33 PM
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Thanks, Julie. This is actually what's called an ekphrastic poem, meaning it was inspired by another piece of art, in this case a painting.
Morning Breakthrough |
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Topic:
Fisherman's Daybreak
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Seaside sunup, wharf shed warms up,
grandsons load up bait lines, and his Jimmy Buffett cassettes. Carton of cigarettes, cooler of long necks, top the checklist of gear to square away. Sunbathed aft deck, tales of shipwrecks, sun dried fish nets and sea legs sway. Helmsman spreads Hellman's on sliced burger rolls, pickle barrel diving while the skipper plots the shoals. Old man's cranky without his kosher dill, his onions and mayo, and margarita swill. He's steady at the wheel, but grandpa’s sextant views don't align with his crew, and anchors wont tie down his heels. |
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Lou Pole
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I'm holding out for a kiss from a rose on the grey.
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Fletch U. Lance
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Poem Challenge
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Rather than create a new thread, I'm gonna post here. There I was drifting... way out into the sunshine, expecting to crash but I'm tied to a string. There's no intentions worthy of mention if we never try, so hang your hopes on rusted-out hinges, take 'em for a ride. Yeah I'm free... free fallin'. Into the great wide open. Ain't nothin' gonna break my stride. Heaven isn't too far away. We'll all be drinkin' that free bubble up... I've got nothing more to say. Playlist: http://music.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL7z34gE4SX9RkFpD8bFPKvmEEZz4XLkcc&si=uuKv95OgErQ_aU2s |
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Topic:
Poem Challenge
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Rather than create a new thread, I'm gonna post here.
There I was drifting... way out into the sunshine, expecting to crash but I'm tied to a string. There's no intentions worthy of mention if we never try, so hang your hopes on rusted-out hinges, take 'em for a ride. Yeah I'm free... free fallin'. Into the great wide open. Ain't nothin' gonna break my stride. Heaven isn't too far away. We'll all be drinkin' that free bubble up... I've got nothing more to say. |
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Topic:
Little things
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Good stuff, Vibes.
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Good stuff, Mig.
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This is a well composed reflective expression.
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Topic:
Twin Flames
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The classic rhyme and structure enhanced the enjoyment delivered in this elevating expression.
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Topic:
False Equivalence
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Very well said. Thanks my friend. |
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Topic:
False Equivalence
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Confused = understand understandably confused = duh!  Thanks for your input, Mike. |
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