Community > Posts By > technovative
Max Dowt
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Topic:
Never Real
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An illusion's reality is often elusive. It's a good to read from you again, mig.
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Topic:
When Patience Becomes a Vice
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Nice! Very creative! Thank you. |
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Topic:
When Patience Becomes a Vice
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I agree with Stormy... Definitely publish worthy, even though you don't feel that way. Very nice, as usual, techno Thanks, River. I appreciate your kindness. |
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Topic:
Top 5 vocalist
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Layne Staley
Etta James Tony Bennett Vince Gill Sebastian Bach |
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Topic:
When Patience Becomes a Vice
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I have no words, Technovative. Are you published? Have you considered getting published? I appreciate the encouragement, Storm. I've shared my writing here and on some poetry specific sites for several years. The things that I write about, and the way I express myself, don't seem to connect with enough readers for me to feel my writing is publishing worthy. No, I haven't been published. It would be gratifying to be though. |
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Topic:
When Patience Becomes a Vice
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Nice poem . Thanks, Julie. |
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Topic:
When Patience Becomes a Vice
Edited by
technovative
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Sat 08/27/22 07:13 PM
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I didn't make plans to stomp
twenty four more cans on Tuesdays. Sunday dad swore I "won't see a case of beer" Monday evening when he slams the truck door. A tape recorded memo might've saved his larynx. If waiting on molasses to pour is a virtue then the brown syrup and broken jars heaped in the church dumpster across the alley from the bar leave me scratching my scalp. My bull headed sobriety does not fall neither does the celibacy that follows the flowering of walls. Thirty layers of dust coat a bottle of sparkling cider saved for my cherry popping party or funeral whichever arrives first. |
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Javier Wei Wittme
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Topic:
Strength of You~
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Yin balanced by yang. This boldly vulnerable expression portrays facing difficult emotions with a partners support. Powerful writing, Storm.
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Topic:
Ebony Dissolves to Lit Coral
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Y'all are appreciated.
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Topic:
Reciprocating Action
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Thank you folks.
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Topic:
Blink and You'll Miss it
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Thanks Julie, and Robin. I appreciate your consistent interest and acknowledgement.
Storm, your kind compliment is appreciated. Thank you. |
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Topic:
Viking and the Little Alpha
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An image rich expression that is a treat to read, Storm.
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Topic:
Ebony Dissolves to Lit Coral
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A curled glowworm
pokes out the gash in night's backdrop like the arced edge of a crystal goblet. Sails of silver dew ripple the foreground surging opal to pearl along the pocked spine of Luna's crescent bow. Blankets of coal dust drape spade clusters glued on twig tips stiff like arm hairs stood up on branches. Backyard's sleep mask nudged to flip up like a window shade by the pinky fingers of Soleil's morning rise. |
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Topic:
Reciprocating Action
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Goose eggs are bursting the seams
against sage council I stuffed 'em all into one picnic basket, zero calorie omelettes for breakfast lunch and supper Piggy banked a few pennies not buying the reach around stick, figured if I scratched enough strangers somebody'd have my back Math errors leave me stomach growling and digging for an unreachable itch with a coat hanger wire, a partner and bowl of vegetable stew might hit the spot |
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Topic:
Where's Winnie's Honey Pot?
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No blossom's sweet
on my poking stick shows cracked hind cheeks aren't crimping my hose her custard pudding ain't whipped by my swizzle pooh bear's dauber stiffed by honey's drizzle |
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Topic:
Blink and You'll Miss it
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Does the martian pilot frown
if top-guns glaze his radar blip? Clown cowboy's ego smartin' saloon blaze trumps shootin' hips. Can lumbering brown bears drop turd when out-of-sight tree falls aren't heard? Is the steam stream just wet hot air if boiling pots don't warrant stare? A toad-stool is a frog topped mushroom without a prim prince kissing it's bloom. Will the poet's murmuring blood pump shrink with clarion lines writ in faded ink? |
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I must be the exception then....I've survived decades without it. Me too. |
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Topic:
Working man thoughts
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Reading this tale reminiscent of old fashioned romance tinged my blue eyes with a little green. Excellent writing, Ladywind.
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