Topic: There is no Hero in Heroin
d4tc's photo
Tue 08/04/09 09:42 PM


I have
never ever

picked up
a needle



never ever
will

try that
that
kills them



thems that tend to pretend
doctors, can keep them

I need something more to feel
then a prick, pricking me
with some plastic tube

I need sex as raw as it is

like a man hungry for a kid

a thumbs up needing a lift

just a hug would do me good

something to tempt my would

if you will i still feel real

raw hunger pains forming

before and after horny

corn on the cobb corny

hot tub warming

bubbles and endorphines

sponge your back relaxing

do i make you tense in su-
spense

or do i drench your thirst
first

i take you behind the barn

only it is not a barn

it is the top of my car

and we are both neck head
neck heads bobbling

kissing behind a fence
with planes taking off above

head as if this was a movie
moving you for real



I sex you up
as the director

and this is your
odd-dition



or as most would
call it

our
first date

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 08/04/09 10:16 PM
flowerforyou

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Tue 08/04/09 10:37 PM
Nice man,,wild,lol,but nice.....cheers,,

Jimmy59's photo
Tue 08/04/09 10:40 PM
:thumbsup:

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Wed 08/05/09 06:03 AM



I have
never ever

picked up
a needle



never ever
will

try that
that
kills them



thems that tend to pretend
doctors, can keep them

I need something more to feel
then a prick, pricking me
with some plastic tube

I need sex as raw as it is

like a man hungry for a kid

a thumbs up needing a lift

just a hug would do me good

something to tempt my would

if you will i still feel real

raw hunger pains forming

before and after horny

corn on the cobb corny

hot tub warming

bubbles and endorphines

sponge your back relaxing

do i make you tense in su-
spense

or do i drench your thirst
first

i take you behind the barn

only it is not a barn

it is the top of my car

and we are both neck head
neck heads bobbling

kissing behind a fence
with planes taking off above

head as if this was a movie
moving you for real



I sex you up
as the director

and this is your
odd-dition



or as most would
call it

our
first date



Omg.....I love it..bigsmile
Sounds perfect......perfect write.drinker
smooched :heart: smooched :heart: smooched :heart: smooched

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Wed 08/05/09 09:40 AM
Marc and I were talking about your, "this might leave a bruise", last night and heroin came up 'cause he was explaining phrases he knew that I'd never heard before. He was reacting strictly to the title, so I read him the whole poem and then he verbalized his reaction. We do this a lot with your writes because I just don't have the experience needed to understand a lot of them, he does, so this way, I learn a lot.

Thank you! (laugh Sorry about taking the long way to get next door in this rambling response.)

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Wed 08/05/09 09:44 AM
WOW!!!bigsmile

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Wed 08/05/09 10:07 AM
i stood in the candy aisle yesterday. i saw spice drops and gum drops and sugary sweet all around. i left without a bite in there somewhere thinking about our first date.