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The Awakening
'Neath crimson moon Mists cling to the earth Disturbed in the silence A raven returns. In dust left to settle Memories rush in Where a human remains Death wasn't the end. Slowly shapes form In this darkness of pain, Bearing great scars Revived once again. Memories of torment Still fresh in the soul Speaking so loudly Dirt's heaved with a groan. Reborn into mortal existance Like a beast taunted to rage Bound to the earth Like bird in a cage. Thrown once again Onto the mercy of life Complete with it's challenges, Loves, forgiveness, and strife. Fadedspirit 8/27/2009 |
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"...Loves forgiveness and strife..."
Without the above, what would we learn...?...A very nice write Faded Spirit... 
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It is good to see you,
and as again, you have captured the heart of this night's moon, reflecting, reckoning, this admission of reminder.. thank you |
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Very true Ainjel. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading.
 Aww, thanks Sharris It's good to see you as well. Thanks for reading. 
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I'm gonna read this a few more times ---- I've been worried, 'bout 'chu Luuuucy and from the looks of this, so have a few others, hmmmmm.
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It's great to see you writing again! I hope you are fine.
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The Awakening 'Neath crimson moon Mists cling to the earth Disturbed in the silence A raven returns. In dust left to settle Memories rush in Where a human remains Death wasn't the end. Slowly shapes form In this darkness of pain, Bearing great scars Revived once again. Memories of torment Still fresh in the soul Speaking so loudly Dirt's heaved with a groan. Reborn into mortal existance Like a beast taunted to rage Bound to the earth Like bird in a cage. Thrown once again Onto the mercy of life Complete with it's challenges, Loves, forgiveness, and strife. Fadedspirit 8/27/2009  I like the style and the message, can't wait to see more
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Ouuuuuuuu he is back!
Another good write my friend.  |
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No need to worry DKW, I've just been very very very busy. Thanks for worrying though. *hugs*
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Aww thanks Mystique! I'm doing well, just busy. Take care my friend.
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Thanks Fusion99, if ya wanna read more, I've littered the forum with a lot of my work.
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Aww, thanx (((MSTeddy)))
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