So why can't I write a pretty little poem?
Sunshine & Flowers outlining the tone
A pretty little poem
Where dark things aren't allowed to roam
The happiness would be dripping right out the sky
A sky with a gigantic smile-filled sun
Singing clouds pealing laughter as the bounce on by
Signs are posted everywhere: "Oh, What Fun!!"
And now we're at a special place,
it's where the dancing flowers call Home.

-there's laughter there, it's been in a few other poems-

They waltz you into a glittering, sparkling motiffe
Dont you wanna stay, dance there?
Don't you just never want to leave?
All the flowers are giggling, singing "Please, Please"
And who're kidding with this pretty little sojourn?

So I'm gonna write a sick little poem...
...gray clouds and WILT outline this tone
A disgusting little poem
Where nice things are slashed to the bone
The plagues would be dripping right out the sky
A sky holding a burnt out frowning son
The clouds won't stop wailing as they screech on by
Signs are posted everywhere: "Oh, What Fun!!"
And now we're at a special place,
it's where the burning flowers deny Home.

-there's pain raging there, it's been in a few other poems-

The SINphony at our waltz of a torturous deceit
Come on! Don't you wanna stay, play there?
Oh, really! There's no other place to leave...
All the flowers are demons, teasing "Please, Please"
So who're we kidding in which little poem?

that poem was awesome! i really liked it!

Thank You writer_gurl and anniebananie85, appreciate it

Nice write Fusion99. I really like the spectrum of this write. Simply and complexly enjoyable.

Man I love your stuff...Good job.

Thunder and lightning
stuck in a storm.
Will you E-merge
or hold fast to your "norm"?

Pick one or the other.
Quickly, make your choice.
or
Heaven forbid, you walk between worlds
within them.


Odd, yet appropriate? The ways of the wyrd!

sometimes the choice is ours-
which to read-
which to see-
either can be be both, in the eyes of the beholder


nicely done...

You can write a "pretty little poem" Fusion if you are so inclined. If that's not where you're at, it's not. There is no judgement about that, unless you impose that upon yourself as in declaring your write as "sick" or "disgusting," of which it is neither IMO.

All writes are what they are hun, not "good" or "bad" because of their "tone." They just are what they are.

Just keep writing what flows from your current Truth, for that will be your Truth, until or unless it no longer serves you

Your write is beautifully human. Can it get better than that?

Hey Faded, thanks for your compliment, be seeing you around!

Girl, I LOVE your stuff Thank You, always like hearing form ya...school goin good for you?

Different, this IS odd, but I like it I dont want to walk between worlds, I want to be in them.

Yo kc003, how ya been? Thanks for your response, (Im trying not to asskiss so much these days )

Hey angel, Im new to internet anagrams, what does "IMO" mean?
I was trying to show both "poles" of nature or the human self here and from your response, I see I acheived my goal. Thanks for your kind words

You had to remind me about the "s" work huh? LOL Yeah school is going well. Lots of homework and lots of reading. How is school going for you?

Yeah I had to reminnd you, I'm proud of yourself for doing this. It's really hard sometimes, but it'll be worth it. I have LOTS of HW and READING I also work for a professor and I have to read through all these nuke computer codes

But all in all it's good, wouldn't change it for the world, and you better not either!

Nope I wouldn't cause I knew I should have done it too many years ago but that's the way it is. Thanks for the good words of encouragement some days or harder than others but like you said, it will be all worth it in the end. Have I told you "You go Boy"? Cause I know will be even bigger stuff than you all ready are!

Heya Fusion...IMO is "In My Opinion"...

You have a gift,,
a pure-ness about you
I so enjoy your thoughts,,,,,!!!!!

Thanks MzEm!!