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Tue 03/16/10 06:52 AM
drinker drama, don't need that trauma
liked that line bro
great write

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Tue 03/16/10 12:26 AM
thank you, welcome if you are new to the poetry forum
peace

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Tue 03/16/10 12:03 AM
wings of some seagulls
wings spread out
i look up and hope god is in those wings
it is a bad night brothers from the row
got nowhere to go

lord the silence of the city
in the backstretch crack is cracking
child with rivers running red with life
and green buckets of ham

now it is cracking
rivers on the forehead
spreading wild flame
crack is sizzling
shiit the high goes away
so fast i stick my hand in some ride
and pull out gods high

sun son brother son
city works like the mutherfuucker is alive
i gotta take a hit my mouth so dry
i would go to hell
to be able to
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Mon 03/15/10 07:30 AM
offer me
the robe of a drunk
who hangs out on ash street
he calls himself
lucifer

i hung around him
because he got me
and suicide ron
drunk
on revolvers
and cheap wine

i hate
the wine
drunk

i hate
the wine
hangover

i hate
lucifer

but i was confused
about a white candle
that leaked wax
onto my cardboard head

i am a chesshead
part horse
part bishop
part devil

i am a king
but only
in my
delusions

sometimes
someone

carries me
in a blackout

why it has
not been worse

i do
not know

but i did
catch an angel
peeing in the sea

partisans
have given me
a maiden of beauty
a long ago
eternal light

i gaze down
the clover cliffs
into the silver sunset
laying down the fire
of the iron maiden
in the shadows
the suns
daughter
who reads
in a dusty
coffeehouse

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Mon 03/15/10 06:58 AM
glasses cool cool cool

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Mon 03/15/10 06:54 AM
BIG Tdrinker

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Sun 03/14/10 08:45 AM
nice

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Sun 03/14/10 08:44 AM
coolglasses

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Sun 03/14/10 08:42 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sat 03/13/10 11:54 AM
glasses

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Sat 03/13/10 11:52 AM
flowerforyou

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Sat 03/13/10 12:15 AM
glasses

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Thu 03/11/10 10:55 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 03/11/10 10:56 PM
i am looking up from the sky
i am writing on a piece of cardboard a three letter poem
shoes are peeling
i found them dumpster diving with my friend ron
they only had a little smell
what i had on were worse
on the shoes i found the rubber is like a mouth
on the bottom of the shoe
but i did not smell
i said a silent prayer to jesus that the blisters would heal
ron is on his second forty ouncer and it is 10:30 in the morning
i try to wait till after the can run to drink
buzzed, pushing a shopping cart down a alley digging in the trash
when fine chicks in bikinis are walking by and surfer dudes
and i got this big head of hair and a holy t shirt and fuucked up jeans thats all i could say about my pants
i did not find good pants in the trash
when i got desperate i stole goodwill bags late at night i wanted to be a nice dressed bum

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Thu 03/11/10 05:01 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 03/11/10 05:05 PM
running with a blade in a blade of grass
in the meadow i hunt words and words hunt me
i go to the source in the wellspring under hope
divine nothing but looking in the well
there was a time i went for the gold
i swept it up in yellow bile in my guts
where the green eye meets the red
they want to put a storyline in my drifter soul
i have been blowing in the wind for awhile now baby
i kiss the dust i wipe the dust from my sandals and i move on
i hide in the day by being in the night
i am blind i am deaf and i just am
coming back to find i cannot be the man i want to be
my words have me in a prison reminding me to keep a blank slate
i am tired of the railroad tracks in the mountains i have swallowed





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Thu 03/11/10 07:42 AM
captivating

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Thu 03/11/10 07:40 AM
Wow!!! My kind of shiit.

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Thu 03/11/10 07:38 AM
Susan, you have such a tender spirit, beautiful write from a beautiful soul

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Thu 03/11/10 07:36 AM

I want to help you, I want to embrace you in a hug, so you know.
I want to take away all your pains, and tears, to make you glow.
We talk and you drink, we talk and you drink.
Over and over, until you can't even really think.
This makes me want to cry, as your slurs, turn to blurs.
Drinking to stop from thinking, all that can be wrong.
Drinking and slurring was my families favorite song.
I want to help you, I want to embrace you in a hug, so you know.
I want to take away all your pains, and tears, to make you glow.
This may seem hard for you to understand,I can't play in your band.
I left that life thirty years ago, swearing to never be a drunk.
I have spent thirty years sleeping sober and straight in my bunk.
I deal with all that life throws at me through knowing I am strong.
This doesn't make me better than you, I just know that its wrong.
I want to help you, I want to embrace you in a hug, so you know.
I want to take away all your pains, and tears, to make you glow.
We have all had past experiences that hurt us to our core.
Things we wish, they never happen, or times we wished we done more.
But turning to a bottle will never change, what we refuse to see.
Tomorrow will always wake you up, reminding you, you talked to me.
Then all the problems you feel and think, lay, until you drink.
I want to help you, I want to embrace you in a hug, so you know.
I want to take away all your pains, and tears, to make you glow.
The problem with your past-time, and here within this rhyme.
Is that your drinking should be seen, like your committing a crime.
Because its stealing away more pieces of you, every time you drink.
Your ability to see yourself, and feel good about what you think.
You allow your pains to stay, so you have reason to drink them away.
I want to help you, I want to embrace you in a hug, so you know.
I want to take away all your pains, and tears, to make you glow.
I love you my friend, and I think you know that.
But I have no miracles to pull out of my hat.
This was all written to show you ONLY ONE SURE THING IS TRUE!
NO-ONE CAN TAKE AWAY WHAT IS YOURS, IT MUST BE DONE BY YOU!:heart:





yes wisdom from this brother, listen and breathe free.

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Thu 03/11/10 07:33 AM
Way beyond amazing!

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Thu 03/11/10 12:24 AM
we are at the train station
she gives towers more height
yellow roses dance in the breeze
train track like braces on a burning tongue
real and life and dreams demand respect
she has rose eyes rose hips
hair just plain black and short
her eyes so wide with beauty defined

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