Topic:
lanquil
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Both way cool... so are you i can feel your cool breeze from here |
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I took it the right way, I was just giving you a hard time
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Topic:
discovery
Edited by
jimz
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Fri 02/19/10 03:16 PM
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Oh this is awesome, awesome writing, stowy, i mean s1owhand
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Topic:
lanquil
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snow transcend over moon
sun dried opera birds song from a deep well yet above i can i want i dream |
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Topic:
Season's of Change
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guess what king of dream i had last night? yep. |
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Topic:
love
Edited by
jimz
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Fri 02/19/10 07:13 AM
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love drawing in
from tunnels deep sharing soul |
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Topic:
kiss
Edited by
jimz
on
Fri 02/19/10 07:14 AM
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kiss long in hollowed tunnels
two tunnels sharing soul |
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Compelling read jimz!! it made me think of dreams somewhere along the way while reading it and then I came to the last line" remember when i was young i could fly in my dreams" Me too man, that's so cool and it doesn't happen for me anymore either THAT STINKS ON ICE!!! Oh I know it was the coolest, yeah and it doesn't happen anymore "stinks on ice" well, that is very poetic, may i use it |
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Edited by
jimz
on
Thu 02/18/10 11:09 PM
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i love the triple beam
red breath in drawn cloud plowing through snowdrift i am falling above sky help me i am leaving the bride green where she drank moss i left my union dues i am in open weather help i am killing myself in the balloon covering fields i remember when i was young i could fly in my dreams |
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Topic:
beneathe concrete waves
Edited by
jimz
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Thu 02/18/10 10:13 AM
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i was born on concrete when i was sixteen streets were mean
i have been robbed drunk and sober i have shiit myself so many times i had friends who drank piss we used to burn our arms to see who would win dogs dogs away from the hogs dogs camping out on beaches in alleys drunk roaring song in midnight so drunk you do not need a blanket to keep warm police fuuck the police blackouts i could not stand having no memory yet i still kept it up voices voices trash digging god doing his corner handout i have fuucked up my life now i win |
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Topic:
A World So Ugly
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awesome
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Topic:
Destinies Justice
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awesome, magnificent
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Left behind what a waste of time
Theyre coming to get you,run on How can i respect your crime They bought and sold you , run on run on. You can call me crazy You can call me wrong Cause i was born a liar, albatross Fly on My home is kind man it pays to be blind I promise to forget you run on No swallowed pride no conspiracy lined Broken promise of virtue run on. You can call me lazy But i know where i belong Cause i was born a liar, albatross Fly on with your trust in love From your god above.. . I beleive the albatross is me I should have seen the sighns Now the memorys far behind It was no big loss, fly on albatross Yeaahh. |
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Topic:
Dive
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I wish I was a photograph, Tucked into the corners of your wallet, I wish I was a photograph, You carried like a future in your back pocket, I wish I was that face you show to strangers, When they ask you where you come from, I wish I was that someone that you come from, Every time you get there, And when you get there, I wish I was that someone who got phone calls, And postcards saying, wish you were here. I wish you were here, Autumn is the hardest season, The leaves are all falling, And they're falling like they're, Falling in love with the ground, And the trees are naked and lonely, I keep trying to tell them, New leaves will come around in the spring, But you can't tell trees those things, They're like me, they just stand there, And don't listen. I watch as the sky clicks from black to blue, And dusk looks like a bruise, I heard, You've been wrapping one night stands, Around your body like wedding bands, But none of them fit in the morning, They just slip off your fingers and slip out the door, And all that lingers is the scent of you, I swear if I threw that scent into a wishing well, All the wishes in the world would come true, Do you remember... The night when I should have said, I've never seen anything so close to perfect than, Lightning striking behind glowing silver clouds, Electricity bowing to nature, Mind bowing to heartbeat, This is gonna hurt bowing to, I should've known..... Last night I prayed myself to sleep, Woke this morning, To find god's obituary scrolled in tears on my sheets, Then walked outside to hear my neighbor, Erasing ten thousand years of hard labor, With a single note of his violin, And the sound of the traffic rang like a happy hymn, I think of happy when I think of you, So wherever you are, I hope you're happy, I really do. I hope you're smiling, Like god is pulling at the corners of your mouth, Cause I might be naked and lonely, Shaking branches for bones, But I learned there are sharks in the water, And the only way to survive, Is to breathe deep And dive. I would like to read more, please. |
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Topic:
When WARlds Collide
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bare powerful poetic songlike
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Topic:
Now I'm Just Rambling
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this is fuucking great!
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Topic:
Elaborate Illiterate
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Topic:
lovelia
Edited by
jimz
on
Wed 02/17/10 03:03 PM
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lemon drama sour puss
cat chasing a dragon slip up trouble bra wow brown moist long limbs where you get those poolroom eyes baby how many times did the clown brush your hair when did cecilia the music spirit give you song how did the queen of the muse send down her dream over and over under and under and through |
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Topic:
Ice
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That was a long time ago and I am fine,,,,sorry to say so much,,,wink,lol,its all good.. I'm here, we're here for you,we're poets together,but we are also very good friends peace out jimmy |
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