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sami jo you didn't know
that you would be the first to go and aly died a ghost like devin they're down below my head in heaven and kati anne was just a flirt but i loved her sunflower skirt she wasn't quite the simplest theft she was, it seems, the last one left but angels come and angels go i wish mike died inside that snow 'cause tom keeps raising up a grin and lost his life because of gin and ashley, megan, both were friends and haley played my blame at ends and jenny found her love, her fun and then she found a second one and lauren sold herself for coke supported me 'til she was broke and al flipped me upside my toes but taught me how to break a nose and john got caught and went to jail his parents came to claim the bail but he went back to the routine dope, then coping, never clean and sami jo, although i know i came to find where you would go i stand against that purple hall forever beating on the wall |
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I this. But you know that.
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Thanks, Leigh. *gummy bears*
I appreciate the support on this one. This is probably more personal than anything I posted... which means it probably sucks more. The names have not been changed because nobody is innocent. *smile* |
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Thanks for the bears, nom nom nom.....
It's awesome because it's personal, not in spite of it. And it doesn't suck. I doubt if you could write a sucky poem if you tried. |
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As always a fantastic write, emotionally deep and the flow goes well with it. Beautiful as always, mate.
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Very deep. Really great poem.
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speechless
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my teenage son and his friends lost several friends this year to tragedy ~ this made me think of them...still. moving write
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poignant, moving and totally awesome!!
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