Topic: revolvers and wine
jimz's photo
Mon 03/15/10 07:30 AM
offer me
the robe of a drunk
who hangs out on ash street
he calls himself
lucifer

i hung around him
because he got me
and suicide ron
drunk
on revolvers
and cheap wine

i hate
the wine
drunk

i hate
the wine
hangover

i hate
lucifer

but i was confused
about a white candle
that leaked wax
onto my cardboard head

i am a chesshead
part horse
part bishop
part devil

i am a king
but only
in my
delusions

sometimes
someone

carries me
in a blackout

why it has
not been worse

i do
not know

but i did
catch an angel
peeing in the sea

partisans
have given me
a maiden of beauty
a long ago
eternal light

i gaze down
the clover cliffs
into the silver sunset
laying down the fire
of the iron maiden
in the shadows
the suns
daughter
who reads
in a dusty
coffeehouse

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Mon 03/15/10 10:40 AM
Drinking guns of Satan fires..NICE READ Jim,,,Cool bro.drinker

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Mon 03/15/10 12:09 PM
Nice write!flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 03/15/10 02:42 PM
Another good write (((Jimmy))) flowers

bastet126's photo
Mon 03/15/10 05:30 PM
flowerforyou

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Mon 03/15/10 05:54 PM
Love it...

mig25's photo
Mon 03/15/10 06:37 PM
Amazing write!!!

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Mon 03/15/10 06:40 PM
Blown away, man.
This is brilliant.