Topic: three letter poem
jimz's photo
Thu 03/11/10 10:55 PM
Edited by jimz on Thu 03/11/10 10:56 PM
i am looking up from the sky
i am writing on a piece of cardboard a three letter poem
shoes are peeling
i found them dumpster diving with my friend ron
they only had a little smell
what i had on were worse
on the shoes i found the rubber is like a mouth
on the bottom of the shoe
but i did not smell
i said a silent prayer to jesus that the blisters would heal
ron is on his second forty ouncer and it is 10:30 in the morning
i try to wait till after the can run to drink
buzzed, pushing a shopping cart down a alley digging in the trash
when fine chicks in bikinis are walking by and surfer dudes
and i got this big head of hair and a holy t shirt and fuucked up jeans thats all i could say about my pants
i did not find good pants in the trash
when i got desperate i stole goodwill bags late at night i wanted to be a nice dressed bum

no photo
Fri 03/12/10 04:02 PM
very moving Jimmy:smile:

bamtino's photo
Sat 03/13/10 04:50 AM
Life is sad, and very cruel,, nice write,,

bastet126's photo
Sat 03/13/10 02:02 PM
the brutality of our world, is often times, the most poetic flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 03/15/10 02:12 PM
Sad reality in this write (((Jimmy))) :heart: flowerforyou