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Edited by
Sharris
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Thu 09/24/09 02:51 AM
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Sweetness
Curl in my lap, Once and the more. I'll tell the old stories, Tis you, I adore. Watching your eyes, Fill with the wonder, Knowing you see, Our time together, tender. Rock me, my baby, In this moment. Soon you'll be gone. This world, you will grow it. Just for this breath in, We will hold on tight. Curl up for now, Until it is light. Raine Les 9/24/2009 |
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Beautiful
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Sweetness Curl in my lap, Once and the more. I'll tell the old stories, Tis you, I adore. Watching your eyes, Fill with the wonder, Knowing you see, Our time together, tender. Rock me, my baby, In this moment. Soon you'll be gone. This world, you will grow it. Just for this breath in, We will hold on tight. Curl up for now, Until it is light. Raine Les 9/24/2009  nice write
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This is like a sugar-bomb Sharris
 , I really liked it.
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Beautiful indeed
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love it
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beautiful
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Edited by
HuckleberryFinn
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Fri 09/25/09 08:17 AM
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sweet, glad to see the "tis", loved its insertion, carried the poem and enhanced it immensely....Nice
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