Topic: You Must Know By Now
GCLIFE's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:25 AM
YOU MUST KNOW BY NOW

You must know by now the feelings that soar
When the rain starts to pour
and the floods crash the floor
You must have seen this act before

You must know by now the repetitive screams
When the solutions are mere dreams
and the loved ones only seem
You must have witnessed these rare extremes

You must know by now the logical decrees
When creations are set free
and the passions passively flee
You must have felt this passing breeze

You must know by now of the visionless eyes
as they fail to recognize
and photograph pure lies
You must have sensed my critical cries

You know by now it takes little to lose
When to gain we must choose
To stoke the internal fuse
Surely you must pay such drastic dues

You know by now when the panic presents
Intelligence laments
and loved ones resent
Surely you must have seen this sad soul repent

And it is on this note of hopeless hoorays
The standing ovation of the next big craze
Where the past present and future graze

and it is this...

That you’ve known all along when my heart needs a beat
That I can look to your eyes and all is complete.

shadow_princess's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:26 AM
wow very awesome

bgeorge's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:27 AM
awwwwww...niceflowerforyou

trINitYinME's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:29 AM
that was deep... Your very talented...You should put that into a contest for REAL... u will win something guaranteed.................. I do a little writin myself

LAMom's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:35 AM
Wow,,, Nice indeed,,,, flowerforyou

no_psychos_please's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:56 AM
Love your work my friend drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:57 AM
very nice nothing like looking into the eyes of another
and some how it makes everything seem okay. bigsmile flowerforyou

ChelleBelle's photo
Tue 11/06/07 10:03 AM
flowerforyou :heart:

GCLIFE's photo
Tue 11/06/07 10:05 AM
thank you :smile: :smile:

shay77's photo
Tue 11/06/07 05:04 PM
flowerforyou happy :smile: Very very nice!