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Dance electric dance
Passions fueled by lust, desire Dreamed dreams to reality come Waves of crashing ecstasy Pleas on whispered voice are carried Cries to never end Music from two souls encounter Flows like rivers, free Thoughts of time are banished The memories of days alone Cares and fears discarded Thrown from breathless heigths Lips bring tunes Played on flesh excited Fires lighting eyes too long clouded Breath shared in kiss unending Embraced in electric dance they linger To music of passions fulfilled Sweet melodies of desires shared Forever recorded within a smile |
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nice!
<----------loves to dance |
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Theres a dancer within my soul... |
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Now there's a dance I want to dance,desires,dreams,the music of passion shared and the..smile tells it all...beautifully written
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The dance of desire...wounderful, honey
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dance like there is no tomorrow!!!
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I thank you all
Pams poems have brought a few cold showers lately, and with the weather changing (down to a freezing 80 degrees ) I figured "why not a little fire in the furnace?" |
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Ahh liquid words of desire and passion, setting every reader on fire...sensuously beautiful
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The gentle dance
aroused sublime begins with silk within the mind. |
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Well you definitely got our fires and desires burning with that one...glad to see the passion in your words...I think we all would like to partake in that dance...So now maybe more will steam up this forum.very nice...see I had to come back and read it again...this will be my second cold shower for the day
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(((cherun))) my wonderful sister of the soul
See what a Saturday night of dancing can do? Have to talk to that feral kitty and tell her to quit spiking my fruit punch! (BTW.... seen my sword here anywhere?) Arty... I thank you for reading and your wonderful addition to my post. I also wish to welcome you to our home and hope you will share many more with us |
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(((Pam))) wanna dance?
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(((Ken))) I will dance with you any day of the week,you my friend are dancing in my heart with me always
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what I like about this poem is it never strayed from the subject, so the dance kept building, you are a good writer, but what I see more in you, is that you are a great man, pure with words, strong in your convictions of freedom, peace
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Jim my friend, I am honored. Not only are your works those of a true poetic heart, but I watched you rise in defense of a love you hold dear, and I admire that in another.
Kudos my brother! |
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Awesome m friend , awww Jim ya forgtot he is a man that has a heart of Gold an displays it very well.
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((( KEN))) had to read this again,thanks for the dance...now another cool shower is needed
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Why shower when you can keep on dancin (((Pam)))?
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Sexy & beautiful Ken...what more could anyone ask for?...Loved it
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Awwwwwww sweet (((Kristi))). You girl are always so kind (and thank God for that! Been warned about that dark side.... see, I remembered )
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