Topic: A little Poem of mine | |
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WARNING: i have a rather warped and dark mind.As such some people may find some of my poems a little disturbing. If you are one of those people i will ask that you keep all negative comments to yourself.
BALLED OF AN INSANE MIND I lie here in the darkness that surrounds me. Trapped inside my glass prison cell. Screaming, screaming loudly. Freedom! I want freedom! Belive me! Why wont you belive me?! I did nothing wrong! I only did as i was told! I had no control, they made me do it! I swear on all things real! Voices, loud shouting voices. Make them stop please. Make them stop! Pounding. I hear pounding. Whose making that noise? Its me. Out. I want out! Please let me go! Quiet. Everything's quiet now. I hear nothing now. Peace at last. and there you have it! my little poem. |
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Welcome to the poem section...
We have many dark and mysteriouse peeps- your not alone! |
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Jesus loves you too! call His name when the voices start to get to you and watch them flee out the exits!!!!peace out!
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ha. i'll keep that in mind wouldee
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I lived it! Brought it home from Nam with me, carried my prison for years, loved it, hated it, and the voices continue. But for 20 years now I have been able to listen to them, and start to understand.
Guess that settles it! I'm an insane mind! They all thought it was talent? Good write for one such as me Thanx |
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Nice warning. Some of the healthiest minds are know are the ones that realize which voices come from where and why.
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Welcome Kagemori, another wonderful dark poet!! Merry Meet
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Welcome to this world within that you have now found.
Remember when ever the voices try to take you down. Just look around for many friends you have now found. We will walk with you until the voices subside. And within this little world of ours you will be accepted with open arms. |
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Thank you for sharing that with us,hope to see you hear with your words and thoughts always love to see someone new...
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Welcome my friend to our land,,, the land of darkness and light,, remember when you need a friend a shoulder or two
Reach out your arms,, within these walls you will find love, kindness and support,,,, Amazing read,,,, most awesome |
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thanks everyone. Im glad you like it and that i can show it to some people without having werid looks thrown my way and people questioning my sainity.
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