Topic: If I hold my breath...
ArtGurl's photo
Wed 08/22/07 06:26 PM
If I hold my breath
Can I stop from feeling?
Will the world stop with me
While I take a rest?

Curled up and feeling small
Not sure when that happened
A life that was mine
Unrecognizable and unfamiliar

How to say goodbye
I don’t know the answer
But I can’t hold on
Just to keep you here with me

Not sure why it's you
Struck with the affliction
I just want to help
And I can’t do a thing

If I hold my breath
Can I stop from feeling
Even for a moment
While I find my feet

If I hold my breath
Maybe there’s an answer
If I hold my breath
Maybe you won’t have to leave

:heart:

TheLonelyWalker's photo
Wed 08/22/07 06:27 PM
beautiful as everything that comes from your heart
:heart: love smooched

no photo
Wed 08/22/07 06:30 PM
ahh my sister of the light beautiful as always flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Wed 08/22/07 06:32 PM
You can hold hold your breath to forget,
but you can breathe
to let go

(GREAT POEM)

Jess642's photo
Wed 08/22/07 06:32 PM
:cry: :heart: Hugs.

blonderockermom's photo
Wed 08/22/07 06:36 PM
very beautiful...by the way, i luv your piclaugh

Puffins1958's photo
Wed 08/22/07 06:42 PM
very touching...

:cry: brokenheart :cry:

LAMom's photo
Wed 08/22/07 07:24 PM
((((( Sherrie ))))

I will breathe for you
I will hold you
I love you flowerforyou :heart:

frankfk's photo
Wed 08/22/07 07:38 PM
vow, absolutely beautiful AG, flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 08/22/07 07:55 PM
All we can ever do is show them OUR love and taste there pains,
through viewing and tending to help them go.:heart:
A very loving poem of sorrow..flowerforyou :heart:

pkh's photo
Wed 08/22/07 10:40 PM
very touchingflowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 08/23/07 06:50 PM
Thank you friends ...for your gentle embrace in a truly difficult time. :heart:

s1owhand's photo
Thu 08/23/07 07:49 PM
{{{{:cry: :heart: :cry:}}}}

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 08/23/07 07:52 PM
Beautiful poem and very touching indeedflowerforyou

shutterguy's photo
Fri 08/24/07 06:06 PM
((((((((((artgurl))))))))))))))))

no photo
Fri 08/24/07 06:43 PM
:cry: flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 08/24/07 07:34 PM
:heart: My prayers are with you tonight.:heart: flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 08/25/07 07:08 AM
Thank you my friends...

and I appreciate the prayers ((iam4u))


:heart: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sat 08/25/07 12:36 PM
:heart: :heart: Blessed Be (((( Sherrie ))))

ArtGurl's photo
Sun 08/26/07 05:06 PM
Thanks to all you beautiful spirits ... I can feel the embrace from here. flowerforyou

Yes ((Mom)) I am truly blessed