Topic: Love Heard My Cries
HotSizzle's photo
Sat 12/03/11 11:08 PM
Too far to lose hope,
Too young to let go,
I grab love by the arm
And threaten to do harm
If it leaves me to die,
Heartbroken inside.

So far off track
I want him back,
But there is no chance
For lovely romance,
Only the void
Of being annoyed.

Step by step I'm moving on;
No longer content in the dawn,
I draw nearer to sunshine
And try again one more time.
No more hurt, no more pain;
No more calling out his name.

I surrender to the freedom
Always meant for me;
I surrender to the peace
That has set me free.
Love heard my cries
And is on my side.

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Sun 12/04/11 12:43 AM
Nice write..

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Sun 12/04/11 01:09 AM
Ya see,,I just KNEW you were a natural born word smith...lol
A very cool write kind of out-of-sight...
Ladies and Gentlemen of mingle,,I give you a new Poet,,,HotSizzle.
She has come to Mingle to share her heart,,and some cool words..
Glad your here and hope to read some more,,,,Be safe and smile a BUNCH,,,,bigsmile happy laugh :banana:

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Sun 12/04/11 04:35 AM

Too far to lose hope,
Too young to let go,
I grab love by the arm
And threaten to do harm
If it leaves me to die,
Heartbroken inside.

So far off track
I want him back,
But there is no chance
For lovely romance,
Only the void
Of being annoyed.

Step by step I'm moving on;
No longer content in the dawn,
I draw nearer to sunshine
And try again one more time.
No more hurt, no more pain;
No more calling out his name.

I surrender to the freedom
Always meant for me;
I surrender to the peace
That has set me free.
Love heard my cries
And is on my side.


flowerforyou Sweet....

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Sun 12/04/11 05:57 AM
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Sun 12/04/11 05:57 AM
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HotSizzle's photo
Mon 12/05/11 09:20 AM
Thank you to all; you're all awesome...from my heart to yours~

Teditis's photo
Mon 12/05/11 11:17 AM
Truly awesome... inspirational even.flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Mon 12/05/11 11:33 AM
"Too young to let go"...we forget that it is not always resilience of our youth. Survival has many facets. An inspirational sharing.

RainbowTrout's photo
Mon 12/05/11 12:09 PM
Inspirational and wonderful to read. Thanks for sharing.:smile:

kc0003's photo
Thu 12/08/11 04:19 PM
nicely done...flowerforyou