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Ok,be honest,This is my first
Finally after so many long years I'm not afraid,theres no more tears I thought I'd never crawl out of this hole You damaged me to the depth of my soul So afraid to trust again,and open my heart That it could be torn completly apart I wont hide in this fear,any longer I've grown and am so much stronger The door is now closed to the past And I'm free to move on,at last. |
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Pkh, I LOVE this poem, it is strong and moving and touches the heart. Kudos and snoggers to you, you are a poet and don't know it - yet... :)
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Thankyou,Shenerd,that meant alot.I love reading everyones writtings,so I thought I'd give it a shot.
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Love it
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Awww very good girl keep them coming we all have to start somewhere I loved it
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Wow Psh Great...Thanks for sharing. |
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Pkh, I have been writing poetry for many years, but mostly showcase my stuff on my own forum. You're welcome to join and post there, too, if you like. :)
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((((pkh))))
I agree very nice work indeed,, Hope to see more from you,, |
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Really good LA-Keep it up...
This is an excellent 1st work.. Go MOM! |
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Thank you all very much.I've been reading everyones,and thought give it a try.I think it helps in the healing process,so thanks.Pam
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good, be strong and buried past, new day, new door, new ppl, nicely done, a time move forward, not backward
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pkh more than most know
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Thanks Frank,I am.
You too TexGal,I appreciate that.You always have great poems,that express yourself. |
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That sweetheart is music 2 my ears & exactly what Cy is talking about.It has taken me a fair amount of time sweetheart to open the door of the cage & resume flight.U know who has helped me tremendously in this area.My dear friends @JSH.They have been right there from the time I arrived till present.And I dear shall be there for U likewise through thick or thin,wet or dry,cloudy or cumulous,whatever.My friendship sweetheart is unconditonal.If I am off-line @JSH then U send an e-mail to my per.addy & I shall come pouncing (I mean running 2 ur side)(lmao)U probably have no clue how happy I really am for U that U have broken free of your past & ready to start a beautiful new journey now.1 sweetheart that will be filled with happiness & contentment that U deserve.And your soul mate who will love U & cherish U for all of your life.That is Cy's hope & wish for U.Amen!Godspeed!Cybear aka Steven(((((((((bear~hugs))))))))))
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