Topic: Moving On
pkh's photo
Mon 07/16/07 04:57 AM
Ok,be honest,This is my first

Finally after so many long years
I'm not afraid,theres no more tears
I thought I'd never crawl out of this hole
You damaged me to the depth of my soul
So afraid to trust again,and open my heart
That it could be torn completly apart
I wont hide in this fear,any longer
I've grown and am so much stronger
The door is now closed to the past
And I'm free to move on,at last.


SheNerd's photo
Mon 07/16/07 05:01 AM
Pkh, I LOVE this poem, it is strong and moving and touches the heart. Kudos and snoggers to you, you are a poet and don't know it - yet... :)

pkh's photo
Mon 07/16/07 05:29 AM
Thankyou,Shenerd,that meant alot.I love reading everyones writtings,so I thought I'd give it a shot.flowerforyou

AnnJones's photo
Mon 07/16/07 06:08 AM
Love it

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 07/16/07 07:22 AM
Awww very good girl keep them coming we all have to start somewhere I loved itbigsmile flowerforyou

sandylou2456's photo
Mon 07/16/07 07:24 AM


Wow Psh Great...Thanks for sharing.
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SheNerd's photo
Mon 07/16/07 08:03 AM
Pkh, I have been writing poetry for many years, but mostly showcase my stuff on my own forum. You're welcome to join and post there, too, if you like. :)

LAMom's photo
Mon 07/16/07 08:37 AM
((((pkh))))

I agree very nice work indeed,, Hope to see more from you,,

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greeneyedlady42's photo
Mon 07/16/07 11:05 AM
Really good LA-Keep it up...
This is an excellent 1st work.. Go MOM!

pkh's photo
Mon 07/16/07 11:13 AM
Thank you all very much.I've been reading everyones,and thought give it a try.I think it helps in the healing process,so thanks.Pamflowerforyou flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Mon 07/16/07 12:28 PM
good, be strong and buried past, new day, new door, new ppl, nicely done, a time move forward, not backwardflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 07/16/07 12:45 PM
pkh more than most know :wink: flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Mon 07/16/07 02:42 PM
Thanks Frank,I am.

You too TexGal,I appreciate that.You always have great poems,that express yourself.

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Mon 07/16/07 05:25 PM
That sweetheart is music 2 my ears & exactly what Cy is talking about.It has taken me a fair amount of time sweetheart to open the door of the cage & resume flight.U know who has helped me tremendously in this area.My dear friends @JSH.They have been right there from the time I arrived till present.And I dear shall be there for U likewise through thick or thin,wet or dry,cloudy or cumulous,whatever.My friendship sweetheart is unconditonal.If I am off-line @JSH then U send an e-mail to my per.addy & I shall come pouncing (I mean running 2 ur side)(lmao)U probably have no clue how happy I really am for U that U have broken free of your past & ready to start a beautiful new journey now.1 sweetheart that will be filled with happiness & contentment that U deserve.And your soul mate who will love U & cherish U for all of your life.That is Cy's hope & wish for U.Amen!Godspeed!Cybear aka Steven(((((((((bear~hugs))))))))))
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