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Topic: Gray Wolf / Walk with Wind'
LAMom's photo
Wed 04/04/07 04:40 PM
Now thiers the Ms Poet I know,,, Incredible, Awesome work here between
two Incredible Poets.... Bravoooooooooooooo flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Thu 04/05/07 08:53 AM
Thanks Gryphyn, Dane and LAMom.

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 04/05/07 10:34 AM
Awwwww and the story contiunes love it. This is an awesome story indeed
bigsmile drinker drinker drinker drinker

venusrose's photo
Sun 04/15/07 08:41 AM
This is an incredible story Poet and Karma. Love to read more as the
prophecy continues...
flowerforyou flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Sat 05/19/07 11:57 AM
Finally, this is it the last installment. We've gone full circle from
the two poems that started this. 'Walks with Wind' and 'Gray Wolf'. Hope
you enjoy.

Gray Wolf - Destiny


The pack has grown strong
There's prey aplenty
I've watched her grow
My time draws near
The wounds too many
I hear destiny's call
Time for another to lead
Another to guide
I won't fight again
My pack is safe here
I leave under silver moon
Howl to the call I hear
I must prepare the way
For she will follow soon
I maim some of the prey
Finding food she should not fear
Clear trail I leave
That she may follow
Avoiding bear and cougar
Snarling warning to coyote
Howling greetings to brothers
Lay path to watered hollow
Doubling back that I may follow
Enter the land of stones
Prey and water hard to find
I see where I'll howl my last
Where I shall leave my bones
The place where I was born
Her voice again I hear
"I'm not afraid when you are near"
Cold nights, she has no pelt
Lay and give warmth beside her
Awakening without sound
To lay known path upon known ground
I climb to high ground
Howl a greeting, cry a warning
I have returned to my home
Gray Wolf has returned


The line "I am not afraid when you are near." is taken from '-Gray Wolf
Totem-' by CCP


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Sat 05/19/07 11:58 AM
~And So It Begins~
The sun rises breaking the nights cover
I rise from my sleeping furs
Clutching the bundle close to me
Reaching for the spear
Today is the day
I know must leave
I hear his call in the wind
Telling me its time
My heart sinks
Knowing this is our last journey
His time must come to an end
He is at the edge of my village
I can see him waiting
Watching over me
As he has done for so long
Shaman comes to me
"Come girl it is time
You must prepare"
I follow him to the kiva
Going down below the ground
In the sacred space
I gather all that I need
Shaman takes me by the hand
Leading me to the hill to the east
Atop as the wind blows
Softly across our faces
And he whispers into the wind
"And her name shall be Walks With Wind
The prophecy she will bring
So she is named
So it shall be"
Red dust blows in the wind
Gritty in my eyes and teeth
Scent of juniper fills the air
Sitting upon the rock
Waiting
A crack of thunder fills my ears
Lightening arcing across the sky
Brilliant purples and pinks
Scent of rain mixing with the juniper
I close my eyes
Clutching the sacred bundle to my chest
Spear clutched in my hand
Waiting
I hear Shaman in the kiva below
Singing for the spirits
Father standing back weeping
"Must it be so"
He cries out in the night
Mother comforting him
"It is her destiny
You must let her be
For she is the prophecy"
I look back at them
And my heart stops
Aching to be a child again
I rise and face the east
Muttering silent prayers........

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 05/19/07 12:52 PM
BRAVO *clap clap* BRAVO


THIS IS TOTALY AWESOME!!!!!!bigsmile flowerforyou


HUMM YA DO NEED TO WRITE A BOOK ABOUT THIS STORY IT WOULD
INDEED BE A WONDERFUL ONE TO READ FOR ALL AGES!!flowerforyou
bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Sat 05/19/07 02:44 PM
Awesome,,, Cheers,,, Bravo

flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

Hotchikita's photo
Sun 05/20/07 03:17 PM
beautifulflowerforyou


now if you can onley put this in a book it would be the perfect
goodnight storie for the kids. please do i am your first
buyer.flowerforyou

WolfSoul's photo
Sat 05/10/08 12:56 AM
I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good.

Bravo to both of you.

no photo
Sat 05/10/08 01:11 AM
:heart: Hey WolfSoul, its all good man..
If YOU found THESE cool to bring back....not a problem and they will be appricated for you doing this,,,,drinker :wink:

pkh's photo
Sat 05/10/08 05:40 AM
wow beautiful Karma and CCP I thought wonderful there both back and look at the dates.So glad you brought this back..bravo to you both...and I personally miss both of your writesflowerforyou

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Sat 05/10/08 07:43 AM
Edited by oya9 on Sat 05/10/08 07:46 AM

wow beautiful Karma and CCP I thought wonderful there both back and look at the dates.So glad you brought this back..bravo to you both...and I personally miss both of your writesflowerforyou
i personally wish karma will enjoy this moment .

empty the cup so it can be filled

ok so your cup spilled
and you hardly took a drink:wink:
but bless the chance to sit in bewilderment!

and listen....
there's rushing water flowing
and on a cool breeze
fresh air from
the breath of 'these' voices
that sing to you
and offer
to refill your cup!


drinker drinker drinker :heart: brokenheart :heart: bigsmile


no photo
Sat 05/10/08 08:06 AM
drinker :heart: drinker Rob, man give me a email...
life is such it is. But friends are such as WE ARE...:wink:

s1owhand's photo
Sat 05/10/08 05:34 PM

I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good.

Bravo to both of you.


to be encouraged!! laugh
this is one of the delights of the site...
and, i had never read it before.

how extraordinary...

do not miss the threads entitled......

A Mood
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/28493

Rumi
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/27576

Gallows
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44868

Beans
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44519

Locos
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/39533

Foolish Child
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/19596

Mine
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18056

BeansII
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/68243

and...
Lyrical Response
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/95153

:wink:

and well so many many more...bigsmile

no photo
Sun 05/11/08 05:15 AM


I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good.

Bravo to both of you.


to be encouraged!! laugh
this is one of the delights of the site...
and, i had never read it before.

how extraordinary...

do not miss the threads entitled......

A Mood
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/28493

Rumi
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/27576

Gallows
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44868

Beans
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44519

Locos
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/39533

Foolish Child
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/19596

Mine
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18056

BeansII
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/68243

and...
Lyrical Response
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/95153

:wink:

and well so many many more...bigsmile



lol


yo! slow ! you rock!flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 05/11/08 05:18 AM


I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good.

Bravo to both of you.


to be encouraged!! laugh
this is one of the delights of the site...
and, i had never read it before.

how extraordinary...

do not miss the threads entitled......

A Mood
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/28493

Rumi
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/27576

Gallows
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44868

Beans
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44519

Locos
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/39533

Foolish Child
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/19596

Mine
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18056

BeansII
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/68243

and...
Lyrical Response
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/95153

:wink:

and well so many many more...bigsmile


i was quoting this one!!!!

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Sun 05/11/08 05:19 AM



I don't know if this is acceptable. I have been digging through old poetry. This piece I found to be a beautiful collaboration between two people. It touches me and I can feel all it conveys. Very good.

Bravo to both of you.


to be encouraged!! laugh
this is one of the delights of the site...
and, i had never read it before.

how extraordinary...

do not miss the threads entitled......

A Mood
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/28493

Rumi
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/27576

Gallows
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44868

Beans
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/44519

Locos
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/39533

Foolish Child
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/19596

Mine
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/18056

BeansII
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/68243

and...
Lyrical Response
http://www.justsayhi.com/topic/show/95153

:wink:

and well so many many more...bigsmile


i was quoting this one!!!!


OMLOG!!!! ROTFLMAO!!!!!! sheeshflowerforyou

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