Topic: Gray Wolf / Walk with Wind'
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Tue 02/20/07 06:04 AM
Thank you G & Cy bigsmile

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 02/20/07 07:53 AM
Okay ya have me on the edge of my chair now wanting more.
This is just too Awesome ya need to get toghether and write a book on
this one. Got my attention!!bigsmile

venusrose's photo
Tue 02/20/07 11:12 AM
I agree. A very captivating story and would be a great book. Looking
forward to reading more.flowerforyou

catchme_ifucan's photo
Tue 02/20/07 03:29 PM
flowerforyou :smile:

karmafury's photo
Tue 02/20/07 07:33 PM
Thank you all. We apreciate. The adventure will continue most assuredly
at the following location: http://www.myspace.com/gray_walk

karmafury's photo
Fri 02/23/07 07:59 PM
The story continues.

Gray Wolf - The Voice

White death leaves us slowly
Game reurns to our hunting ground
My pack, my people grow strong again
A sound of thunder in cloudless sky
My sire falls, his blood flows free
We scatter, two leg takes his pelt
What is this thunder that kills
Why take a pelt and leave flesh
We have no leader, we have no guide
Combat, rolling, biting, submission
We have a new leader, and I wait
Someday I shall lead, I shall guide
Take my father's place, make pack mine
Lead them in hunts, guide them
My time is not yet come, my destiny
I must wait for my time, my fate
Yet in my dreams I hear a voice
One not of the people, a two leg
A gentle voice, a younglings voice
She whispers to me, calls to me
"Ma'iitsoh I do not fear you
I am not afraid when you are near"
I leave the pack, leave my family
Search for this voice, this two leg
To know why a two leg would speak
Why a youngling fears me not
Without the pack I hunt small game
Hard to catch and not as filling
I seek on, I must know this two leg
Leaner I become, hunger kept at bay
I think of the pack, I long for a hunt
And the voice grows stronger, clearer
Spring rains come to become summer heat
When the voice of dreams calls loudest
I climb a slope, in dark of night
Arriving at mornings first light
From a cliff I see the dens, not dens
Two legs dens, I lay and wait
The voice is loud here, I watch
A youngling comes from a den
My ears perk,I quiver like a cub
This is the one, she speaks in dreams
Rising I howl my greeting, Speak my name
Acknowledge her as my destiny
"I am Ma'iitsoh, I am Gray Wolf
I am your destiny, I am your guide"
I see her stop, searching for me
She has heard me and knows me
I howl my joy and turn, my pack awaits


The line "I am not afraid when you are near." is taken from '-Gray Wolf
Totem-' by CCP


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Fri 02/23/07 08:03 PM
Many Seasons

I have spent many seasons of time with Shaman
I grow stronger in my dreams and visions
And I listen closely for his call every morning
Not always does he call to me
I catch glimpses of him swiftly running ahead of me
As I take my many walks
Always whispering the words that can only reach his ears
"Ma'iitsoh I do not fear you
I am not afraid when you are near"
I long to stroke his silken fur
Feeling his comfort spread through out my being
But I know it is not our time yet
Time has seemed to pass so quickly
I was but a toddling child when the bundle first sang to me
I am growing bigger and stronger each day
I have learned to hunt from my father
I have learned to heal from my mother
I have learned to interpret my visions and dreams from Shaman
My time is quickly approaching
My body is growing and changing with each breath I take
And as I change my fears grow
I am so afraid that I will let my people down
That I will fail
That my destiny is not to be
And I hear whispered calls on the wind
I have spent many seasons of time with Shaman
I grow stronger in my dreams and visions
And I listen closely for his call every morning
Not always does he call to me
I catch glimpses of him swiftly running ahead of me
As I take my many walks
Always whispering the words that can only reach his ears
"Ma'iitsoh I do not fear you
I am not afraid when you are near"
I long to stroke his silken fur
Feeling his comfort spread through out my being
But I know it is not our time yet
Time has seemed to pass so quickly
I was but a toddling child when the bundle first sang to me
I am growing bigger and stronger each day
I have learned to hunt from my father
I have learned to heal from my mother
I have learned to interpret my visions and dreams from Shaman
My time is quickly approaching
My body is growing and changing with each breath I take
And as I change my fears grow
I am so afraid that I will let my people down
That I will fail
That my destiny is not to be
And I hear whispered calls on the wind
"I am Ma'iitsoh, I am Gray Wolf
I am your destiny, I am your guide"
And I fear no more
For I know Ma'iitsoh, Gray Wolf
Is out there waiting for our destiny
Guiding me on my way
And I fear no more


The lines"I am Ma'iitsoh, I am Gray Wolf
I am your destiny, I am your guide" are taken from Karmafury's "Gray
Wolf-Voice" and used with permission.

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Fri 02/23/07 08:27 PM
words fail at the beauty and depth of the combined efforts..


*z loudly applauds, whistles and gets up to give them both a standing
ovation*


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karmafury's photo
Fri 02/23/07 09:11 PM
Thank you Z.

Poet as usual your side is told wonderfully.

LAMom's photo
Fri 02/23/07 09:12 PM
Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!

I am glad your home Karma ((Karma))) flowerforyou

venusrose's photo
Sat 02/24/07 10:58 AM
THANK YOU for continuing to share this story with us, CCP and Karma. I
so love it! And always looking forward to the next chapter.
TYflowerforyou flowerforyou

Hotchikita's photo
Sat 02/24/07 11:35 AM
Poet,Karma,that was beautiful beyond words. Coninue the good work. I
read them from the start and they are just(wow). flowerforyou :heart:

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 02/24/07 01:41 PM
To see the story of destiny written is an amazing site, Feeling of the
two growing together is beyond words description.

*APPLAUD*bigsmile bigsmile bigsmile*APPLAUD*:

G

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Sat 02/24/07 08:27 PM
Thank you everyone bigsmile


more to come....

venusrose's photo
Sat 02/24/07 08:32 PM
Oh, I'm excited...can't wait to read more!happy

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Sat 02/24/07 08:39 PM
:heart: To "P" and "K", you both just have a BEAUTIFUL WAY!!

Stay in the WILD with your HEARTS of FURY!!flowerforyou smokin
smokin :heart:

karmafury's photo
Sat 03/31/07 07:22 PM
Okay We finally continue. Thank you all for your patience.



Gray Wolf - Leader

Summer green spent near her
Colors change and the pack calls
I hear them in my heart
I must return home, return to my people
I travel with little rest, little food
I feel a need, an urgency
Summer green to winter's death colors
The land changes and I feel morning frost
I hurry, I feel their need
The land of my people is in sight
I can hear them cry in the night
It is a cry of hunger, of no prey
I see my brothers, sisters and packmates
Weakened from lack of prey, lack of meat
As I near he who replaced my sire comes
I have changed, grown, become stronger
Become wiser and no longer fearful
I stand pround before him, he growls
I am no threat yet he feels challenged
Ears lay back and bared fangs show
I have faced my dangers on my trek
Coyote could not stop me nor could snake
Two legs with their thunder sticks
Tried to stop me and I eluded them
I accept the challenge issued
We circle, lunge, bite, evade
Twist, turn, leap and roll
Teeth flash, jaws snap, I bleed
My sight leaves as blood covers one eye
He has left an ear on the ground
He leaps to push me to ground
Twisting my jaws snap on his throat
Jaw meets jaw, fang meets fang
He lies bleeding, he'll not rise
I howl my victory, I howl my rise
I howl to Dreamland that a Gray Wolf comes
The pack howls, joining me, destiny approaches
Now we must leave, death awaits us here
Where there is no prey there can be no hunter
I shall lead them to where there is prey
Where they can be strong and proud
I shall bring them to where she is
To where I know the hunt is good
Somewhere closer to my destiny
I hear her calling, my time approaches
We shall hunt and I shall watch
Watch and protect the two legs
That our destinies join and come to be

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 03/31/07 08:02 PM
The story continues. I love it.

bigsmile

G

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Wed 04/04/07 04:23 PM
The Prophecy Begins...

The time of winter is coming quickly
A time of hunger for many
My people are not to be hungry this time
We have enough and more to spare
I feel him now, even closer than before
Watching me, protecting me
Even from afar
I feel his wounds, healing though they are
He brings his pack to my lands
So they too may know no hunger this winter
My dreams are filled with the prophecy now
I know I will not fail
The bundle speaks often shouting
To be heard and understood
Gray Wolf, I hear you too
Your words of encouragement
Your words of guidance
I carry on with my days
The day of my leaving coming ever closer
I prepare myself to leave
And approach the Shaman's kiva
My mother and father behind me
Gray Wolf ahead..waiting
For the prophecy to begin....

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Wed 04/04/07 04:37 PM
You two Are awesome, I love this story, Two of the best writers on the
site.Brava!Huzzah!flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
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