Topic: When Patience Becomes a Vice | |
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technovative
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Sat 08/27/22 07:13 PM
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I didn't make plans to stomp
twenty four more cans on Tuesdays. Sunday dad swore I "won't see a case of beer" Monday evening when he slams the truck door. A tape recorded memo might've saved his larynx. If waiting on molasses to pour is a virtue then the brown syrup and broken jars heaped in the church dumpster across the alley from the bar leave me scratching my scalp. My bull headed sobriety does not fall neither does the celibacy that follows the flowering of walls. Thirty layers of dust coat a bottle of sparkling cider saved for my cherry popping party or funeral whichever arrives first. |
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Nice poem .
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Nice poem . Thanks, Julie. |
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I have no words, Technovative.
Are you published? Have you considered getting published? |
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I have no words, Technovative. Are you published? Have you considered getting published? I appreciate the encouragement, Storm. I've shared my writing here and on some poetry specific sites for several years. The things that I write about, and the way I express myself, don't seem to connect with enough readers for me to feel my writing is publishing worthy. No, I haven't been published. It would be gratifying to be though. |
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I agree with Stormy... Definitely publish worthy, even though you don't feel that way.
Very nice, as usual, techno |
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I agree with Stormy... Definitely publish worthy, even though you don't feel that way. Very nice, as usual, techno Thanks, River. I appreciate your kindness. |
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Nice! Very creative!
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Nice! Very creative! Thank you. |
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EXCELLENT
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EXCELLENT Kind of you, Robin. |
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