You brought to the
Surface

Anguish
I pushed
Away

Ever protecting the
Girl

Who was
Petrified
To
Relive

To
Remember.

Ashen faces
Stings
Echoing silence
Nothingness.

Emotional
Abandonment
More echoing
Silence.

Closed doors
Closed eyes
Closed fists so
Tight
White knuckles
In
Hindsight.

Strength of you
Dives
Deeper
Dives into
Blackened
Murky waters.

Pulling entangled
Masses
Void of
Everlasting.

To the very surface
From
Yesteryear.

Where I stood
In front of
You.
In all
My glorious
Vulnerability
Rawness
Nakedness.

Waiting for
You.

Strength of you
Scared me.
Enticed me.
Challenged
Me.

To be
More
Of who and
What
I
Am.

Of what and
Who
You
Are.

Your
Strength
To
My
Gentleness.



24 August 2022

That's an awful lot to say in so few, yet powerful words.
Harkens me back to time when I found I need to take space to take care of me.

Take care little one. Time will heal.

.

Deep. Makes you think about whatever it is you’re holding onto, look at yourself and how you decide to react.

Yin balanced by yang. This boldly vulnerable expression portrays facing difficult emotions with a partners support. Powerful writing, Storm.

Nice poem .

Thank you David.

Thanks Batman.

Thank you so much, Techno.

Nice to see you again Julie. Thanks.

Such a beautiful and powerful expression of inner feelings and wisdom. Very nice, Stormy!

Beautiful words, Storm 🦋

Thank you River & Merry.

It was Adorable Storm
Keep writing, wish to read more of them

Thanks Aatheera.

I have a handful in the cobwebs on the site from eons ago.

That's wonderful Storm, it would be great if I would get a chance to read them
I loved your expressive way of bringing out the emotions from the soul.. I felt that while reading

That is very kind to say. Thank you.

Storm this poem mirrors how i felt some time back. I still wonder from time to time… but you come across as a strong person!
Beautiful words and thoughts!

Thanks Sparky. I appreciate your thoughts.

WOW....So few words yet so powerful in expression