Never Real


It is a
relentless
mist
falling like a subtle reminder
that the storm
has yet to pass

Its whispers
reveal
the sound of the thunder
that tears me apart
as if my soul's thirst
needed to be quenched
by a never ending pain

Love
unfair
are the secrets that fall
like raindrops from the heavens
muddying trust
with the confusion
that exposes
the roots of forever

It is a
relentless
mist
that reveals
the darkness
once painted so beautiful
by the light of not knowing
it was never
real

Hi Mig

Welcome back. Ive missed your poetry.

This is beautiful Mig! Is always refreshing to read the thoughts of the soul!!

Nice poem .

An illusion's reality is often elusive. It's a good to read from you again, mig.

Beautiful version

Nice comparison of instincts and nature
Your writings are adorably mature

It's nice being back...running a business while being short staffed takes it toll. But I do find inspiration from time to time.

I thank you!!!!! I love writing. I get to take a journey to wherever my heart leads me.