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How many
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chauvinists males does it take to change a light-bulb?
None the b1tch can cook in the dark! |
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immaculate
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thank you Sharris/LA/d4
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Feast or Famine
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i hunger for your lips your face i crave your booming laughter your skin and thirst for your kisses i wish for your night time aroma and the rhythmic rising and falling of your triangular back with voracity, i want you to pass through me the non-use of capitalization helps ggive it a "dreamy" quality something I do quite abit. Sensually written |
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Insidiously Inflicted
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For you— have become the infectious disease I have always longed to invade my heart. P.S. I also have Philophobia, the fear of falling in love, so after we have sex please tell me what a horrid lover I am. Sincerely, Sigmund very funny thank you |
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Ghost in the Wind
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keep the flame burning...passioned writing thank you pdk/flame |
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Ghost in the Wind
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The soft candlelight in the room,
slowly steals the blackness and gloom, The nighttime parlor of my shadowed mind. A face appears within the flame, delivering to me your name, A vision of beauty and light. Drifting away before I ever see, Dissipating in a haze of smoke, now free. Floating into the shadowed beyond Taking with it my light, leaving me blind in the dark of night. A lone candle flame In the wind torn night, Helping me discern wrong from right. You are that and more to me. So beautiful yet hard to hold, If you are taken I will be left cold Without the comfort of your embrace. I seek to encompass your essence, The consuming flame of your presence Within my glass body. To protect you from harm and fear, Let you burn and keep you near To draw comfort from your heat. My heart is frozen, hard as stone, rigid and glacial, and alone Trapped by my deafening silence. I am not afraid to let you melt this sheath and find the warmth hidden beneath To see my soul as no one has before. I watched you burn as your flame danced, My heart melting, my soul entranced, A bead of wax rolls like a tear. The shadows flutter in the burnished light, my body awakens to the splendor of the sight. The smoke swirls, a ghost in the wind Describing to my eyes, the beauty of you A portrait of innocence, intentions true, Possessing a gossamer delicacy. Transfixing my mind and shattering my soul I yield to what I cannot control. Devoured by my starving eyes, My ever watching mind warns to be aware, The scent of wax lies heavily in the air. Like the petals of a white rose Glowing, the lone fragment of fire, Reveals my deepest truest desire. Wondering if you will burn if I get too close. So far away, I have stayed From the light as I have prayed. Now I throw my caution into the wind And feel the freedom of love's embrace My hope restored by the glow upon your face. |
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Insidiously Inflicted
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Dear Avatar of the Cosmos,
I must admit that your harmonious systematic est modus in rebus of abstractional analyticity and unblemished beauty, that only the Gods could have created, has made my therapist a contented control freak. For I am insidiously inflicted with the faceless fear of poetry and of long words. But your inflexible enchantment of mind, heart, and sight has coerced the improbable, the inevitable, the Muhammad Ali attitude, and the William Shakespeare within to emerge ensorcelled and ready to scribe sensuality in verse, just for you. ~~Pigeonhole Me~~ Like a complex Einstein theory, you have manipulated musical rapturous renditions of befuddled bewitchment upon my enraptured spirit. I see Pleiades playfully dance within your hurricane eyes piercing platonic depths of soul unrecognized. Luscious lips intoxicate my mind with brilliant breath of depth that serenades thunderous thought twisters— and spreads sensual salutations with your luminous smile. The sway of your mesmerizing mind slays beliefs inscrolled in stone, like the Sun’s sizzling assassination of the nocturnal sky. You’re a shooting star that blazes across my barren universe satiating salvation in sweet torture. Pigeonhole me, tie your hands behind my back and cuff us tenderly together. Whisper and whimper a sweet breeze upon our loins of desire and we’ll dream away the daylight hours. For you— have become the infectious disease I have always longed to invade my heart. P.S. I also have Philophobia, the fear of falling in love, so after we have sex please tell me what a horrid lover I am. Sincerely, Sigmund |
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dam california
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i am going to California in a couple months. I can't wait! hope you enjoy your visit or is it a move? Where in california are you going to visit? It truly is a great plae to live and visit |
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All the Way Out
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nice acrostic
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would you lie
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if i asked
you to lie in shallow breath for no other reason then to expose my thoughts feelings by touch like a feathered friend in ashen sky would you lie without ragged breath nor burrowed eyes of a predator allow muddy hands to knead lumps of regret and strung out emotional addictions like grandma use to while making bread and you ask nothing just shiver from the excitement of getting to know me unmasked as mother theresas tears and a four shot espresso spiked sullen is the whispered breath on the back of your ear warm as milk in the sunshine of who i am or are you but a figment of imagination panned on the skyline of a hope twisted on licorice lips |
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Very nice thank you kim |
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immaculate
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thank you Kim and Puff
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I am…
simply complicated; a liar, a lover, a hater, a rouse in the crux of Existence. I am dark and light, the yin and yang of the moment, and if you venture into my world the oxy-existence becomes a part of you forever. I am a seeker, a sucker, a thief, a driving force of pain. I am the son of abuse, the father of charm, and the whore of your lust~ a darkness waiting to unfurl and consume. I am scathed, bathed in a false reality; I am the winner of dumb luck and loser of the greatest love. I am… a bag of masks. |
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immaculate
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nice thank you the one moment in my life that is etched within my mind as clear today as when it happened 21 years ago, the birth of my first born |
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immaculate
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as spark to brilliance,
the Heavens hush and opens wide nine celestial centimeters hairless head of sunshine slides radiating its primitive prism of majestic magnificence in a shimmering spectrum of rainbow rapture lucent pinkish hues glisten gagged gasps of awakened awe crinkled wrinkled smile struggles to suckle angelic air until slapped crisp cry splits humbled heart when suddenly shining star stops perfection poses proudly for doting daddy seven second scene painted priceless and permanent like last breath before death |
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23 and 1/2......... second time around!!!!
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Red-Blooded
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nice use of poetic device in particular alteration
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there are some lol
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dam california
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is all of a sudden a slacker state. Whatever happened to this great state?
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Topic:
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Edited by
PoeticMaster
on
Tue 07/22/08 05:48 PM
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i like! |
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