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Topic:
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Edited by
PoeticMaster
on
Tue 07/22/08 05:18 PM
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Alas but i am a mere slave
to Her tell all desire, to scribe of the life... i wish to live- Yet live can i through trials, triumphs and troubles. Pen in hand (no time for white-out) i feign Her tall tales with adventures of love, dreaming that perhaps she spied me. i walk going nowhere, as if on a treadmill within the mundane. When suddenly, from left field, She decides its time, to be the star in Her version of “Invasion of the Thoughtsnatcher” Forever enslaved by my Mistress, my b1tch of a Muse. |
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Topic:
do nice guys finish last
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There is a difference between being nice and a doormat. Nice works well if you have clear boundries, communicate them, and then enforce them respectfully. Nice guys tend to finish last quite often though I think alot of the "nice" comes from insecurities. Be nice to yourself first, love and respect self everything else falls into place and by being a nice guy, you will "win"
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916 and 530 Nor Cal
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530... gold country up in the foothills
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Topic:
six-feet under
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very nice thank you |
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Topic:
Touch
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very nice with the yearning beheath the expression
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Solitude Becomes You
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Ack. Nevermind. lol I bet I could conguer something in my mind as to its meaning |
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Artistic Leeway
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Great Write. why thank you both |
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six-feet under
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well paper-poet,
how silence stings like salt poured, i know it's torture, haven’t made that call, content in my armor comfortable in my stagnant state too numb to flinch. or maybe i pull at the fragile mind and see nothing but chaos and confusion, madness and raw passion but once touched i wither into grit and dust. perhaps it is compassion in me for others, a need to spare us both of inevitable combustion. perchance i fear your power, your prowess to make me tingle while i await your response with labored breath. I don’t know really all i secretly surmise is i repeatedly rescue myself and let you drown, yet still you remain buried in anticipation. |
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Topic:
Weeks and Seas Between Us
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lovely I have been there!
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Artistic Leeway
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in the half light of silence
I closed my unseeing eyes as mud became rock and underneath laid our story, lain in thrift, tough as an axe handle and fragile as daylight. descent into the inevitable invisible, where the memory of you lingers, suspended from above like a piece of art -- you can find me in the dreamer’s lounge, on my knotted knees, where your stone is cold -- and when love decides to find me and I open my eyes let it be you. |
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Topic:
Slide Next To Me
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ty LA
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Rewrote And Remixed
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ty wench and teagle
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Rewrote And Remixed
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Nice poem thank you |
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When my parents where still alive, we had large family gatherings(30+) One thanksgiving 20 or so of us were in living room drinking and talking chit. My then wife had a dress on, went into bathroom, took off panties, and while I was sitting on the recliner she "sat" on me. We kept convo going(barely) and not a single drunken family member had a clue of what was going on
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Rewrote And Remixed
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I, the country song that wailed
buckets of rain when played. Scratched, I skipped life’s song. Warped from exposure – scorched beyond recognition, tarnished having been overused and abused. You, the jukebox with a playlist. Repeat selected of a single classic – or so thought. Located in a simple search I became the downloaded file, a ripped song from a worn cd. Cheese-cloth hand buffs out scratches and shines away blemishes. Placed into heart’s library, hesitatingly added to current playlist – alongside “the oldie.” Spun on the disc-changer of love pristine, a beat formed in unison. A new song reverberated and an old one frequently skipped. Climbing the charts, like a shooting star, mouse right clicked and classic removed from playing list. Number one on heart’s chart, sorrowed tune rewrote and remixed into a soothed love ballad. Right click, left click on delete – classic sent to the recycle bin. |
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Topic:
your given name....
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given name is Michael and native name is Blazing White Wolf or Blaze for short, both are used fairly equally
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your given name....
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My name is Valerie...I go by Val,b*tch,baby,& Sweetheart...take your pick Oh and Dork..can't forget dork lol now b!tch I like! My ***** anyways |
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beautiful. nice write. thank you just throwing some words together |
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I… the quill that scribes a thrill
of poetry upon ivory vellum with ripe passion fruit grown erect and ridges that curve succulent. you... the parchment sighing attachment of ethereal passageways heaven bound. An unfurled roll of slender-skin gyrates to the beat of moaned lyrics written. Salty inspiration weaves glistened heaves within shivers penned on warm silken lips, paper thin sighs escape hardened-pen inhaler and typed heat boils under quivering scroll. Paper covers rock, strolls the alabaster block, inscribing in a slow and rhythmic power walk. As the poetic document states the All Mighty resurrected while writing erotic Scripture. Pen & paper collaborate as they evaporate carnal desires and watch them condensate into a liquid mix of perfect teamwork to scribe a fluid state of tactile ecstasy. |
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Topic:
Fears
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well stated this brings to light simular experiences and feelings for many
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