Topic: Feast or Famine
myanimalcracker's photo
Thu 07/24/08 10:12 AM
i hunger for your lips
your face
i crave your booming laughter
your skin
and thirst for your kisses

i wish for your night time aroma
and the rhythmic rising and falling
of your triangular back
with voracity,

i want you to pass through me

tanyaann's photo
Thu 07/24/08 10:13 AM
flowerforyou

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Thu 07/24/08 10:14 AM
ohhhhh....I like this...reminds me of yet another poem that a wonderful poet sent me recently...niceflowerforyou

PoeticMaster's photo
Thu 07/24/08 10:15 AM

i hunger for your lips
your face
i crave your booming laughter
your skin
and thirst for your kisses

i wish for your night time aroma
and the rhythmic rising and falling
of your triangular back
with voracity,

i want you to pass through me




the non-use of capitalization helps ggive it a "dreamy" quality something I do quite abit. Sensually written bigsmile

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Thu 07/24/08 10:15 AM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

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Thu 07/24/08 10:24 AM
mmm..canableism

myanimalcracker's photo
Thu 07/24/08 10:28 AM
Thank you (((tanya, MsKim, Poetic, Cy)))!! flowerforyou flowerforyou


lastman -- CANNIBALISM...not even

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Thu 07/24/08 10:30 AM

Thank you (((tanya, MsKim, Poetic, Cy)))!! flowerforyou flowerforyou


lastman -- CANNIBALISM...not even
Sorryflowerforyou

starlynsangel's photo
Thu 07/24/08 11:19 AM
sensual...nicely putflowerforyou

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Thu 07/24/08 12:07 PM
cravings of the best kind-great job:smile:

s1owhand's photo
Thu 07/24/08 12:41 PM
myanimalcrackerbalism :tongue:

myanimalcracker's photo
Thu 07/24/08 12:58 PM
(((star, pkd, s1ow)))

Thank you! flowers

myanimalcrackerbalism!! rofl