as spark to brilliance,
the Heavens hush and opens wide
nine celestial centimeters
hairless head of sunshine slides
radiating its primitive prism
of majestic magnificence
in a shimmering spectrum
of rainbow rapture
lucent pinkish hues
glisten gagged gasps
of awakened awe
crinkled wrinkled
smile struggles to suckle
angelic air until slapped
crisp cry splits humbled heart
when suddenly shining star stops
perfection poses proudly
for doting daddy
seven second scene
painted priceless and permanent
like last breath before death

nice

thank you the one moment in my life that is etched within my mind as clear today as when it happened 21 years ago, the birth of my first born

fabulous

thank you Kim and Puff

Well Written! I enjoyed this.

There is nothing in life more than the birth of my Children,, well maybe my Grandbabies,, that just brings pure bliss into ones soul,,,,

Beautiful,,

I remember finally breathing when I saw them
a beautiful recollection you have gifted us.
vivid and brilliant.
s

thank you Sharris/LA/d4

very nice

the act of a new life joining us is a most awesome event indeed

that it is!!! thank you pkd