yes you may tomo

Thank you Leigh and I know you are going to love the poetry.com site

thanks so much for reading the story poem and the feedback on it. I just kinda let it develop without really knowing how it would end.
I want to give a heads up to this fun poetry website that you can post your poems on. It's called poetry.com

Daybreak

She stood on the hill overlooking the shore
her heart breaking for a love that isn't anymore

Violent waves crashing against the rocks below
as great tides of loneliness begin to flow

Raising her head to the lone moon in despair
thoughts without him are to much to bare

The wind billowing in her hair in the darkness of night
whispers the desperate song , take flight, take flight

Out of the mist she struggles, turns and walks away
determined yet to face another day

Of the new dawn air she starts to breathe
sadness and sorrow begin to leave

Glorious sunrise coming from the east
a buoyant spirit has arisen she now feels at peace

walking though the fresh meadow, blooms a new start
the a lightness of being now filling her heart

Gone is the darkness that she had begun to roam
daybreak is here she now has returned home

lovely

Passion Be Yours

Let me sing a song of love for you
a song so very fine
Let me haunt you with my sweet caress
with a blazing pure love so refine
Let my soul whisper to yours
a true love forever given by mine
Let your lips receive my wanton kiss
with a ferocious passion so divine
Let us feast from the table of love
then with blissful fury shall we dine
Let our bodies soar as one
then sweet rapture will be thine

Remember life is beautiful and the greatest beauty of it lays within.....it's love. Feel the love and give the love.

Just feel the love for life is beautiful

Thanks for the kudos everyone.
Hope you enjoyed it as much fun it was living it, writing it, and reflecting on it.
Luv ya, anita

Frantic love

I tell you I love you, a lovers colloquy of romance
passions flaring,let us now begin the dance



frantically kissing your soft full lips
teasing and biting, giving little nips
kiss you on your neck,breathing hot with desire
whisper in your ear..make me feel a sensual fire
We start a slow rhythm, an ageless jungle beat
hungry kisses, bodies writhing, faster baby, feeling passions heat

You have hit my sweet spot, I scream yes, yes
my body is on fire with your sweet caress
Riding in harmony to a song many lovers have sung
oh delirious sweet ecstasy now has begun
We soar together to the moon and to the heavenly stars
creating an sublime universe that is only ours

Our sacred love has risen to passion ethereal peak
hearts beating as one, love now complete

Bodies sweaty, juices mingled together we lay content
a love shared together that is what “joy” is meant

thanks so much you guys for the wonderful feedback

Passion Be Yours

Let me sing a song of love for you
a song so very fine
Let me haunt you with my sweet caress
and a pure love so refine
Let my soul whisper to yours
a love forever giving of mine
Let your lips receive my wanton kiss
with a passion so divine
Let our bodies soar as one
and sweet rapture will be thine
Let us feast from the table of love
and in our hearts we shall dine

thanks for the kudos, it was fun to write such a silly little poem

A blurb
Give me a simple poem
a poem for the common man
not too complicated
one I'll know he'll understand
a poem can be good without thee or thou
just a simple verse
without the dramatic pow
to the point, just short and sweet
not three pages long
composed on a cell, it's just a simple tweet
well here it is,here's my stinker
a terrible poem
surely, not for a heavy thinker
rate it a two or maybe just a one
this is a blurb
written just for fun

Broken Dream
love once flourished is at an end
emotions dissipate,
leave nothing for us to mend
scattered is the broken dreams of happily ever after
sadness and regret replace what was joy and laughter
we have fallen from the skies
how did it happen, how did it die?
We both can feel it is no longer there
loss of love, no longer do we care
I thought with you endless would be true
a lifetime of years, not only just a few
tight smiles, sad farewells
nothing more to say
so we just slowy
drift away

Really a fine piece of writing
young and edgy

welcome to you my friend
wonderful poem, well done!

wonderfully written

thank you tazz, thank you hippie, Thank you leigh

how beautiful this is