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Topic: Breath
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Wed 05/01/13 08:42 AM
Breath Brush my hair back Softly from my eyes Hold me in your arms So I breathlessly sigh Hold my hand Laugh with me As we walk Down the street Inflame my heart Stir my passions deep So my heart quickens At the sound of your feet Make me catch my breath Any second now I hear your sound I can feel you now

1Cynderella Joined Mon 02/18/13 Posts: 2398	Wed 05/01/13 09:50 AM
How beautiful Hippy.

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Wed 05/01/13 10:03 AM
Nice hippie !

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Wed 05/01/13 06:24 PM


ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 05/01/13 11:27 PM
Lovely!

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Thu 05/02/13 02:49 AM
Thank you cynderella, kik, tazzops and artgurl!

Cutiepieforyou Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 43085	Thu 05/02/13 10:30 AM
Nice one hippie

woznotwoz Joined Sun 02/03/13 Posts: 199	Thu 05/02/13 11:21 AM
another great hippie

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1540	Fri 05/03/13 01:56 AM
Breath Brush my hair back Softly from my eyes Hold me in your arms So I breathlessly sigh Hold my hand Laugh with me As we walk Down the street Inflame my heart Stir my passions deep So my heart quickens At the sound of your feet Make me catch my breath Any second now Damn this is nice! I hear your sound I can feel you now

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 05/03/13 04:07 AM
Thanks cutie, woz and mig

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 05/03/13 04:30 AM
Feelings....

littlelambkin Joined Mon 02/25/13 Posts: 92	Fri 05/03/13 07:40 AM
how beautiful this is

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 05/03/13 09:56 AM
Thanks lambkin and leigh

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 05/03/13 11:00 PM
Very nice

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sat 05/04/13 02:47 AM
Thanks pkh

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sun 05/05/13 06:39 AM
Nice work, oldhippie 1952. I'd say your feelings do shine through here. I guess all men really feel this way inside. I do. Well done!! tommy boy PS: I like your form and poetic structure. Very appealing, my friend. ===

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