Daybreak

She stood on the hill overlooking the shore
her heart breaking for a love that isn't anymore

Violent waves crashing against the rocks below
as great tides of loneliness begin to flow

Raising her head to the lone moon in despair
thoughts without him are to much to bare

The wind billowing in her hair in the darkness of night
whispers the desperate song , take flight, take flight

Out of the mist she struggles, turns and walks away
determined yet to face another day

Of the new dawn air she starts to breathe
sadness and sorrow begin to leave

Glorious sunrise coming from the east
a buoyant spirit has arisen she now feels at peace

walking though the fresh meadow, blooms a new start
the a lightness of being now filling her heart

Gone is the darkness that she had begun to roam
daybreak is here she now has returned home

Lovely, here's to a new start

thanks so much for reading the story poem and the feedback on it. I just kinda let it develop without really knowing how it would end.
I want to give a heads up to this fun poetry website that you can post your poems on. It's called poetry.com

Very nice and free-flowing. I liked it! You tend to rhyme well in this one, littlelamb. Things flow unimpeded and ring well at the ends.

Nicely done, may I? -

tommy boy

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Very nice Lambkin ....And thanks for the heads up on the poetry site, going to check it out right now...

Thank you Leigh and I know you are going to love the poetry.com site

yes you may tomo