I long for the virginal love of yester year, the one in which left me unabidingly clear. Clear as the day you left me holding my breath and to this day have not exhaled. Left with the subsequent sorrow filled look of being impaled. Impaled by not of you, but of my own most unsavioury rhetoric. Entangled in the quagmire of choice, prolific. Prolific choice in my youthful exuberance. Plagued by a insatiable appetite without temperance. Temperance now applied to the dwindling wick of my existence. I'm motivated by my quest of balance with great precipitance. Precipitance in the circular rotation of thoughts inevitability. Starved for the innocence of your love's fragility. Fragility in the weakened state of my being. Drawn once again for a rememberance of a love so freeing. Freeing in the aspiration of again one day breathing.

Clearly i'm late comer to this example of poetic prowess, none the less its with great admiration i must say great write!

Prayer for the simple But loving task of the almighty. Lord here my cry, here my plea. I'm not asking for me. My prayer comes as a request of thee. Please remove fear to be. Please Lord grace Susan your mercy. Amen!

Goodbye to a couple of the best comedians and the godfather of soul. Personally Bernie Mac is and always will be top five of comedians.

Mornings rebirth continued eternally. Pretty write Angel.

You know what Quebec is to Canada? its the whinny bicth that complains about everything, wants to leave but can't and still wants all the benefits.

ironically their is pain my life that would never live without....my children and them being a pain in my asz.....lol

Great idea for exception of one. What happens when better trained killers come home when their done. Free they will be to walk amongst my children and me? What has changed in their contempt? What will stop them from an attempt? The law didn't in the beginning and won't in the end and when their on your door step will you be prepared to defend? Free better killers scary thought.

Thanks C really tough this year on the whole.

Thank everyone for reading and the comments.

Hey you and me both! No hurry at all. Just a write in a different perspective.

Thank you! Much appreciated.

Hey, Mark thanks for posting. You know, actually i have been pondering with a recent unexpected death in the family. My uncle, this is what i think his outlook was like in the end. He had a rebel attitude and didn't really believe in anything so its kinda tough. Angel what an interesting concept the idea that we our our own paradise. Perhaps to some that maybe true but for me i think i'm in a constant renovation period of my paradise.

What a feeling of whimsical floating so calm and gentle. Beautiful.

Truly moving! Rest in peace his soul with my undying respect and gratitude.

I relish the day for the final judgement. Judgement defined categoricaly; good, bad, heaven or hell. Yes i relish it! Bring it on! Release me of my own prison for the imprisonment of your own. Yes release me of the imposed and self imposed bindings, tidings, ridings. I'm weak and solid. A rock, no more do i want to be. Feeling, not feeling. Drip upon me, sink in, freeze and break me from within. Close my eyes and my mouth. Do not allow me to ingest, invest, detest a single morsel more. I'm at your mercy. Lay me, before i commit perjury. Weigh me. I'm obese but can't take the slim fast alternative. Random. Straighten me. Confine me to your words. Don't allow me to walk, talk, balk, take stock or mock. Are you not tired of carrying me on your windshield. In my sickness. Wipe me away........me before i blind those that ride the blazen path. Scar me, label me, define me, slap a great big sticker on me that says "reduced" and be done. Like a fruit ready to be plucked i rot In waiting. Give me paradise.

Great write.

My daughter and son are everyday: a mirror, a reminder, a gift, a surprise, a challenge but moreso a heart within my own. That will not let me die or give up, that gives me strength that i normally would never realize and that makes me feel things i didn't know i could feel. Great write! Thank you.

I wish i was, thank you though.

Confusing yes but seams like you got it.