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Edited by
bigblue29
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A thousand words could and have been said of a womens; eyes, hair, lips, and hips but that is not the core. That is just a precursur a beckoning invitation to the depths. The core......it's well beyond the wisdom of the eye, the flick of a lock, the passion driven lips and the hypnotic sway of the hips. He whom dares travel to the perfect balance, the eye of the storm, perhaps then you are prepared for a lifetime of education and anticipation. Diving into what the french call......L'oublier. Translated not "The Forgotten" but "The Bottomless". A journey seldom realized by even the women herself. Sailing through the oceans of tears for every emotion, flying over the fires of indignation, and yet still never possessing the key to the undestructible fragility. The place where logic originates and disipates, ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and imageless mirrors. A universe of shoebox size compartments labeled in a language unbenounced to man.
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such beauty to hope for..in being
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A thousand words could and have been said of a womens; eyes, hair, lips, and hips but that is not the core. That is just a precursur a beckoning invitation to the depths. The core......it's well beyond the wisdom of the eye, the flick of a lock, the passion driven lips and the hypnotic sway of the hips. He whom dares travel to the perfect balance, the eye of the storm, perhaps then you are prepared for a lifetime of education and anticipation. Diving into what the french call......L'oublier. Translated not "The Forgotten" but "The Bottomless". A journey seldom realized by even the women herself. Sailing through the oceans of tears for every emotion, flying over the fires of indignation, and yet still never possessing the key to the undestructable fragility. The place where logic originates and disipates, ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and imageless mirrors. A universe of shoebox size compartments labeled in a language unbenounced to man. Beautiful sentiments, and thank you for sharing. Nicely written. You may try running it through MS Word though. A lot of misspellings. (Not being rude, just trying to help, because the content is so good it should be made almost perfect, as your thoughts are worthy of perfection in their display). My favorite line: " Sailing through the oceans of tears for every emotion, flying over the fires of indignation, and yet still never possessing the key to the (indestructible) fragility." Very nice words from what must be a fascinating mind. Respect, C |
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Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!
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such beauty to hope for..in being Thank you Sharris!
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Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done! I'm flattered you think so.....thank you for reading and your wonderful comment.
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Edited by
bigblue29
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Tue 08/05/08 11:37 AM
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Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done! Double post sorry.
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As I said earlier. You are an amazing man Eric.
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As I said earlier. You are an amazing man Eric. Thank you, very sweet of you.
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Nicely done!
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".....ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and....."
So beautifully stated 
MsWiz would love to see your write ..... |
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".....ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and....." So beautifully stated Thanks Angel, i posted this poem to the challenge already.
MsWiz would love to see your write ..... |
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".....ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and....." So beautifully stated Thanks Angel, i posted this poem to the challenge already.
MsWiz would love to see your write ..... I just saw it. Great job bb 
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Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!
Ditto, words from a wise man 
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As I said earlier. You are an amazing man Eric. Thank you, very sweet of you.
you're welcome |
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Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done! Ditto, words from a wise man |
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Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done! Ditto, words from a wise man most men don't think that way these days Eric but it's nice to see that there are some that do...
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Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done! Ditto, words from a wise man |
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hmmmmm
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