I relish the day for the final judgement. Judgement defined categoricaly; good, bad, heaven or hell. Yes i relish it! Bring it on! Release me of my own prison for the imprisonment of your own. Yes release me of the imposed and self imposed bindings, tidings, ridings. I'm weak and solid. A rock, no more do i want to be. Feeling, not feeling. Drip upon me, sink in, freeze and break me from within. Close my eyes and my mouth. Do not allow me to ingest, invest, detest a single morsel more. I'm at your mercy. Lay me, before i commit perjury. Weigh me. I'm obese but can't take the slim fast alternative. Random. Straighten me. Confine me to your words. Don't allow me to walk, talk, balk, take stock or mock. Are you not tired of carrying me on your windshield. In my sickness. Wipe me away........me before i blind those that ride the blazen path. Scar me, label me, define me, slap a great big sticker on me that says "reduced" and be done. Like a fruit ready to be plucked i rot In waiting. Give me paradise.

What if, just what if, you WERE already paradise! Heaven, filled with life and Love

What if there is no need for judgement, only Love?

Pondering are we blue. of what might become of you on that day?

Nice write..

Hey, Mark thanks for posting. You know, actually i have been pondering with a recent unexpected death in the family. My uncle, this is what i think his outlook was like in the end. He had a rebel attitude and didn't really believe in anything so its kinda tough. Angel what an interesting concept the idea that we our our own paradise. Perhaps to some that maybe true but for me i think i'm in a constant renovation period of my paradise.

I like your use of language, metaphor and sound.

Without death to self, there can be no rebirth. This doesn't even have to have a religious connotation. Nicely done.

Always wondered if this is not our Heaven or our Hell we live in today guess we will know when the day comes. Not that I'm in any hurry to get there for sure. good write

Thank you! Much appreciated.

Hey you and me both! No hurry at all. Just a write in a different perspective.

Thank everyone for reading and the comments.

Nice job and sorry for your loss!

Thanks C really tough this year on the whole.