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Reality
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Thanks so much for your kind words.
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A Challenge For The Ladies
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Okay ladies, since the lovely MsWizard Challenged us gentlemen on the core of a women. I feel its only just to pose the same challenge. What is the core of a man? In poem form please. I have one on the way~ |
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A Challenge For The Ladies
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He comes across as strong and crude And she turns away from him He stands amongst his friends Head thrown back with laughter From some snide remark spoken In the crowd He catches a glimpse of her glaring And he no longer feels so strong A sip from the glass in his hand Then he starts towards her She leaves the room, stepping out Into the cool night And he follows her She speaks angrily to him As he reaches for her When she tries to step back He pulls her to him Speaking softly Of his love for her Her anger recedes The strong and crude has left him To be replaced By tenderness and whispers As he enfolds her into his arms Without her The center of his world would be empty She is the love of his life His reason for being She is his core tdb 8/6/08 Thank you Seena for your beautiful poem.
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Thank you to those that have and will read this. Your comments are always welcome.
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A Challenge For The Ladies
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I can only write of the core of my man, the one man I truly understand and get, the rest of em just boggle my mind. ~The Core Of My Man~ Strip away the layers of him, the ones seen by the outside world The layers that remain are what has always been seen by me, his core His gentleness and patiences with unending questions and ramblings of nonsense His gentle softly spoken words of me, about me, to me Intelligence hidden from the rest of world yet shared willingly and openly with me A touch from his hard working rough hands, yet so gentle and soft, full of love His eyes as they soften when he looks upon my face, hears my laughter His knowledge of my every whim and mood, knowing even better than I know them The love that shines from his eyes as he watches and listens to our children gather together His tears that fall when he cannot ease the pain of me or our children, be it physical or emotional His core, his very center, open and warm, hidden from the rest of the world Yet shared willingly and lovingly with me, openly from the start Nothing hidden, nothing stored away..open from the very first day Cavatica your man he needs to read this! That is the the core. Thank you for sharing! I'm very impressed. great write.
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A Look Inside
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".....ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and....." So beautifully stated Thanks Angel, i posted this poem to the challenge already.
  MsWiz would love to see your write ..... |
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Reality
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Our reality is so personal to each and every one of us...embrace what is yours! I totally do Angel in fact this is just a humbling tool. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Reality
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Our reality is so personal to each and every one of us...embrace what is yours! I totally do Angel in fact this is just a humbling tool.
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Reality
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Our reality is so personal to each and every one of us...embrace what is yours! I totally do Angel in fact this is just a humbling tool.
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Well done my friend! Hey thanks Mark.
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Awww sweet thank you for leaving this saying within my post fit it perfect good one Well actually your poem inspired this poem so thank you!
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nice |
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A Challenge For The Ladies
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Okay ladies, since the lovely MsWizard Challenged us gentlemen on the core of a women. I feel its only just to pose the same challenge. What is the core of a man? In poem form please. Blue... That is NOT fair, I don't write poetry...  |
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A Challenge For The Ladies
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The Core Of A Man The core of a man rests within his breast; his heart beats to Love that which can be seen, and that which cannot. His Love is like a river flowing, always knowing its essential direction despite the detours nature can impose. A man knows a detour is just a detour. A man is sure of who he is even when the world tells him otherwise; “you should be this or you should be that” simply does not faze him. He will cry when his emotions move his Soul to weep. He goes with the flow, not getting stuck in rigid roles, ego, or pettiness. A man is protective of those he Loves, yet when life’s waves come crashing in on him, he knows where to go for shelter. He can tell when he’s had enough, and needs to be held by the arms of Love. A man will look you right in your eyes and when he does, you know you’ve seen Truth. His eyes indeed are the windows to his Soul, to all he needs you to know to Love and understand him. A man could stand on his own, yet he knows “No man is an island.” A man knows where he’s been and where he is going. He will take you with him, if you let him. He will make mistakes yet never take your dignity. He will let you see him in his humanity; he will show you humility, dependability, vulnerability, fallibility, predictability, availability, inability, ability, sensuality, sexuality....the world through his eyes. Let him take you with him as the man that he is. JDS 08/05/08 That was so amazing, it is though you you know me better than i know myself.
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A Challenge For The Ladies
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Okay ladies, since the lovely MsWizard Challenged us gentlemen on the core of a women. I feel its only just to pose the same challenge. What is the core of a man? In poem form please.
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Reality
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I dream sometimes when i'm awake. I dream sometimes when i'm asleep. I dream sometimes even when i'm dreaming. But when i feel i'm not living the dream, i remember somewhere there is someone that is dreaming to live my reality.
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“Within Our Dreams”
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nice write. I dream sometimes when i'm awake, i dream sometimes when i'm asleep, i dream sometimes even when i'm dreaming, but when i feel i'm not living the dream i remember somewhere there is someone that's dreaming to live my reality.
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A Look Inside
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As I said earlier. You are an amazing man Eric. Thank you, very sweet of you.
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it takes two
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Equally both to give both to receive. Nice write.
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A Look Inside
Edited by
bigblue29
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Tue 08/05/08 11:37 AM
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Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done! Double post sorry.
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