Community > Posts By > ChristTrueServant7
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Poetic Works
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Now to downplay my last poem lol, here is a poem I wrote entitled: When You Left, ironically though I was in a good relationship at the time. So I do not know where the inspiration came from, but it did.
When You Left Forsaken, Forgotten did you to me when I proposed to be with thee. That was when you departed from me. In so it became forever ago you left me, and the idea of "we" behind. Now you return and expect “us” to be, but foreign you became to me. Forgotten and abandon did the idea of "we" became to me; so long ago when I first proposed the idea of "you and me ". Now you are sad and full of regret. For we can never be; as I have found another that is actually willing to be mine. So now you know the truth of what love can be: Forever: Forsaken Forgotten Abandon Just like you did to me and the idea of "we" all those years ago When you left… |
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your thoughts
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Well thought of could, it could use a few breaks or periods though, so the reader can take each line in, just as you intended. Good job and keep writing!
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Loss
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Well done sir I dig the rhythm and beat, keep writing and God bless
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Poetic Works
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Awe thank you, she also asked for a copy of that poem lol
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Poetic Works
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Thank you all, this was my first poem when I started to officially write poetry. Here is another poem I wrote it's called The 50th Wedding Anniversary. My Sophomore year of High school, I took speech class and we had to write a toast or a short speech for a formal occasion. I don't recall if we had to dress up,but it was fun none the less. I was given the topic of a 50th Anniversary, so I decided to write a poem. My girlfriend's first name at the time was Melissa...but little did I know that was also my teacher's first name as well. So you can imagine the look on her face after I finished reading this poem.
50th Anniversary Poem To My Dear Sweet Melissa My Darling My Bride For 50 fantastic years you have been my beautiful wife. Like Rebekah for Isaac God has chosen you for me and for 50 amazing years we have lived happily and content and still so madly in love like Romeo and Juliet we defied all for the sake of true love and even after 50 years. My love still burns for you and God alone. My darling My pride My Precious One I look forward to sharing 50 years more with you by my side. I love you my beautiful wife. |
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Poetic Works
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[Your Face]
As the dawn holds hands with the moon and the stars begin to fade. The arms of the clock begin their dance as time begins to fade. Your face Your face Is all I see nothing more beautiful or radiant then your face right next to God. Your face Your face Is all I see as I drift off to sleep at night. Your face Your face is what I wish to see when I awake at dawn’s new light. If I had to make one last wish before I die. It would be to see Your wonderful beautiful face for the last and final time. |
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Amen brother
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It is a cycle of Loneliness I go through; for a time, I will be right with God ignoring the longing of my heart for someone to love. Everything in my world will seem right, even though friends will ask "how can I guy like me be single?" To which I often reply I do not know, but God has a plan."
But as soon as more then a days worth of free time comes by my heart goes to war against my self-control and starts longing like crazy. On the worst of nights leaving me in tears with much pleading prayers of forgiveness and dread. But then of course the sun comes up and God reminds me: “For I know the plans, I have for you,” declares the LORD, “plans to prosper you and not to harm you,plans to give you hope and a future.” (Jeremiah 29:11) Proverbs 16:4 "The LORD works out everything for his own ends--even the wicked for a day of disaster." |
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Stop Looking For Love
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Well first I find it slightly ironic that the title "stop looking for love" would be found on a dating site lol. But then I took a closer look and read your post to which I say well said sir!
We are recognized by the world to be Christians by the way we love each other and others. |
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Good Guys dont finish Last.
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The finish is always better when it is made with your integrity and faith not only intact but grown as a result.
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HELLO
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Amen brother
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Romantic
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I just miss the romance
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Of Words~
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Very well done, passionate with a great rhythm and terrific choice of elements (or nouns). Don't stop writing, God bless
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Deadly words
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Very nice, as a poet myself, I really like it and encourage you to keep writing. God Bless
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