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Topic: Loss
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 07/29/12 02:34 PM
Loss The pain of your heart thuds in your chest Keeping passage with the drips of time People think you handle it best They don’t know the pain inside. Forever lost and forsaken A young life Too soon was taken From your world. You weren’t there to protect A now precious angel Still you did not neglect But feel guilt to this day. Always youthful and free More than three decades They will always be Always youthful and free.

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oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sun 07/29/12 09:13 PM
Thank you ladies. Now cheer up!

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ChristTrueServant7 Joined Sat 07/28/12 Posts: 15	Mon 07/30/12 11:06 AM
Well done sir I dig the rhythm and beat, keep writing and God bless

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Mon 07/30/12 05:54 PM
Thank you everybody!

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Mon 07/30/12 06:32 PM
Those little hands sneaking safety in yours and mine, craft golden cherub hair & angel feathers to make a chain of memories that float ever so gently down to butterfly kiss your cheeks and wreath your frown in amor.

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oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Mon 07/30/12 07:18 PM
Thanks you two. Wish I would've thought of those lines ladywind!

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