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... When I was Beautiful ...
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A Truly Excellent Write......   UP2US... thanks for your appreciation 
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... When I was Beautiful ...
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what a moving and telling write-very nice  yes great write thanks PRIME |
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... When I was Beautiful ...
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what a moving and telling write-very nice I'm glad it spoke to you PKD1220,thanks
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... When I was Beautiful ...
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Wonderful ,,,,truly touching Thank you DIAMOND,it must have resonated
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 Beauty of a write! Glad you liked MsTeddyBear...thank you
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... When I was Beautiful ...
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 HEY!!! That was really really good  Thank you MICHAELL427
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... When I was Beautiful ...
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"When I Was Beautiful" when I was beautiful I welcomed accepted embraced every challenge when I was beautiful Every mountain seemed a mole-hill every desert a sand box when I was beautiful Every rainbow was like ice cream every raindrop like honey dew when I was beautiful Blue skies never ended forever were the sunsets fixed and extended when I was beautiful Thorns didn’t scratch daisies grew bold every song bird to hatch when I was beautiful Irrepressible my Spirit needed no approval I knew I was Whole Then came distinctions dissections divides Vacated my Beauty insist I take sides when I was beautiful These colors none dread black,white,yellow,red Colors of candy & marbles I said before lost virtues and hate that was fed when I was beautiful Counted I one kiss for each mile Now educated and worldly contempt served with a smile I remember being beautiful barefooted and free now stand I here sophisticated poor me Whose arbitrary ERROR was it to substitute the inextinguishable "flame of child-likeness" for the wilting decay of "act your own age" To thrive again to be alive again Oh enchant my eyes and unleash my heart again To be whole again debris free again let me relapse to beauty once more again ... When I was beautiful ... Such a beautiful peice of work, thank you for sharing... ... you are welcome MzEm,glad you liked it
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... The Lie of My Eyes ...
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That's sad and beautiful JR  I'm so glad for the ending "A washing my eyes no longer did lie..." Ditto, very powerful piece. Thanks TxG....
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... The Lie of My Eyes ...
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That's sad and beautiful JR I'm so glad for the ending "A washing my eyes no longer did lie..."
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*** Gender War ***
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Contemplative writes JR thank you Angel You're welcome JR!  Keep 'em coming .... will do
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*** Gender War ***
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gives me a lot to think about from a different angle-very nice Thanks PKD how the angle wasn't too steep.
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... How To Love a Woman ...
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How To Love a Woman how to love a woman Is no mystery of scale how to love a woman Requires no doctorate from Yale 1st. rule in sequence Without question wouldn’t fail Assume NOT to be her owner to be defined by a male. 2nd. rule in sequence If you don’t already know Hands to yourself deliver NO blow. If you think you’re doing her a favor feeding her cum She’s worth more that her parts nipples,legs,labium. By now mouths are wide open as my words get untame Grow up people this is no childish game. 3rd. rule in sequence As you’re now so attuned Your trust comes before a request for her pubes to be pruned. 4th. rule in sequence Now that you’re over the fence Your balls and your honor make her fort of defense. 5th. rule in sequence Now that you’re all ears nothing romantic about pizza & beers. 6th. rule in sequence As these words are worth more than a glance there’s no other foreplay like music and dance. 7th. rule in sequence As you’re now sensing the mood time and space for her passions so unwise for to brood. 8th. rule in sequence Yes love is divine Not all's blessed with the inches and packing a NINE. Whatever your package the will you MUST find with vision and traction the walls she MUST climb. 9th. rule in sequence And we are nearing the end however you do it keep your eyes off her friend. 10th. rule in sequence It’s as serious as debt Compassion;Presence;Wit;Intellect no matter the order studied,dissect These are the VIRTUES to ensure she stays wet. LOL    That is a seriously written poem JR... I had to read it over a few times.... lol thanks Prime |
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“Do You See Me?”
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“Do You See Me?” Do you see me standing here? Is it my voice you hear? Is it my arms that hold you tight? And is it me that tells you everything will be alright. Is it your arms? That will keep me from all that harms. Could it ever really be? I’ll be the one that you see. Or do you look past. What could be in front of you at last? And you can’t even see. How life ahead could really be. I guess you will never know. Could this love ever grow? If only you would look my way. And see what is before you this day. K.L.M 5/08/2009 *No I have not met anyone just thoughts going through my head*  ... poignant
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*** Gender War ***
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Very good write... I appreciate your critique TX
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Contemplative writes JR thank you Angel
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Very good write.. hey 2KM glad you liked 
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Far out...An amazing write...Good thinking stuff... Ainjel thanks for the comp...
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The Eyes
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My Soul opened up and felt every moment of human joy. I thought my heart would explode. I also felt every moment of pain and suffering so tightly kept locked in some box, touching the frailty inside all humanity. How is it that we keep our sanity in a world that can leave us in dismay, in disarray, or frayed to the bone? I don't know, but perhaps the answer is simply that we know Love exists, despite world anguish that seemingly persists. You keep Loving and so will I. We'll observe one another by noticing the eyes, as they are said to be the windows to the Soul. We know we are never alone when connected as One, not separated by anything. Is it possible to be free, if indeed we'd let Love be, only to see with the eyes of Love? ~© JDS 05/07/2009~ hmmmmmmm Right back at ya JR Thank you for stopping by. welcome Angel... funny how the eyes can be the Matrix of the soul or its' pall bearer.
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*** Gender War ***
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Gender War
When in our history did women evolve out of reach When did conversation devolve to a monologue preach When were men,woman forced to pick their sides each When was a woman appraised as the net of her parts When did women appraise men bearded old farts Wasn’t it normal for a man’s heart to a dash, say something fresh ended up with a slap If he was charming even without cash her smile would be beaming and sat on his lap Wasn’t it normal to greet in the streets and if eyes lingered long it would end in the sheets When in our history did men evolve to the cave Decried by the women as not knowing how to behave When did the instinct to follow our heart End with a ride in a state correctional cart Men are often told to go with balls But most often end up in justice’s halls When did it happen that women now frown and now hiss At pleasant attention and a boyish blown kiss Is there something in nature a miss was that he wore no name brand from Paris In doing such folly he’s now so amiss As now in society that’s considered a diss How sad in reflection we’ve now come to this 6 billion souls with few having knowledge of bliss How sad in reflection we’ve now come to this Where women find companionship at the end of a switch How sad in reflection we’ve now come to this 6 billion souls with few having knowledge of bliss How sad in reflection we’ve now come to this Where men find companionship in a tight hollow fist Is there something in nature amiss Gender illusions Cultural abyss |
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... The Lie of My Eyes ...
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I could feel the power in these words..Awesome piece. thank you Kuuleinani I'm glad you did
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