yea sometimes u gotta give a reality check, not putting down the country tho, just some things i think need to change a bit

thanks for the feedback

A Beautiful Disaster


Was it fate,
That tasted tart,
And unchanged the memories,
Of a broken heart,
You were the fullness in my life,
Now Im left empty and hollow,
Carved out with a knife,
Sour, like a pill thats hard to swallow,
The world seems dimmer,
Without you around,
The stars have no vivacious sparkle,
The music box has no sound,
Candy tastes bitter,
And day is now dark,
Pillows are lead now,
And satin feels hard,
All my senses are melting,
And withering away,
Because you're no longer here,
To preserve my sanity to stay,
Angels are crying,
And death sounds so sweet,
My soul has left me,
And now God, I meet,
I listen to my heart beat fast,
And beat faster,
Until it stops,
To reveal,
My beautiful disaster,
Because fate is a fairytale,
And love is a lie,
Life is so hard,
but dont give up because you think,
Its easier to die.

nice poem, i think thats what everyone is looking for in the end.

like mudvayne, slipknot and disturbed. saw all of them at concerts

this is probly my last one for awhile, dont think im so good at this, ima go back to the freestyle aspect lol

Stars and stripes

I pledge allegiance to the legion of doom
A nation that fights paraplegic countries
Calling to arms the limb less
In this cold world forever ready to fight
We try to cleanse the flag
while in the process red and blue bled on the white
i steady my procession of thought
the lessons of this nation
where adolescents are swelling their stomachs
adept at the art of procreation
I stand tall and march to the bars of life
hardened by the fall from grace
this tainted halo placed above my wounded heart
our commander in chief panders your intelligence
and wins praise from the amber waves of mass ignorance
flags flown at half mast and our pastimes are beautiful
Juiced giants stand defiant singing America the usual
Rather than start, on the madness of march
it saddens me, that we are bound by laws other then that of gravity
God's grip has slipped, no longer grabbing the free
Now its average to see illicit activity on a reel
Prisoners of warfare tortured while we're eating a meal
Stripped of our stars i need a solution
disillusioned my state of mind has decided
to suceed from the union
and bleed red white and nuetral, giving up our father's fight
These colors do run, all that remains in my eyes
..are stars and stripes

just thaught about it.

Liars Are Honest Too

If ever it were a favor to deceive you,
I’d call myself the nicest man on
Earth and tattoo it to my heart,
Then leave my scent to linger upon
Your neck and the entire world
To torture your feelings dry;
So that when the drought came,
It’d be my basin of deceit playing
The lead role of the gentleman.

I’d open entrances for you that
Led to places you never wanted to go,
Watching as you stumble between
The corridors of where you
Thought you were and the hell
That you’ve always actually been in.
By then you couldn’t stand to
Let go of my all too familiar hand,
The kindest escort to our Eden.

I’d pull-up chairs for you that
Resembled thrones to your liking,
Wired with an option to eject
Tied to my kind wrist that
Out of courtesy I could never
Allow your eyes to notice.
You’d sit down aiming to please,
Unaware that it would be my arrow
To miss the apple on your head.

By the time our date were over,
I would manage to have convinced
Your father for his blessings and
What’s left of your heart as
The topping for our wedding cake.
Believe me, I’d lick my lips
At the thought, but in efforts
To become the kindest of them all,
With my back turned...
I'd cough the ashes of you.

gone in 60 seconds

u seem to have a fast pase look

reminds me of something i would write, nice stuff man

nice putting it together, it flows well

These Are My memories, Let Them Burn...

These are my memories, let them burn...
Like ashen black Mondays
covered with a thin layer of Hiroshima dust
as Nagasaki fades in the background
that unsettling feeling sets in to stay a while

as i sprinkle salt on strokes...
the seasoning nullifies hopes
like summer is DEAD.
and fall broke a few bones into winter
is this a joke?
hell no, it's as real as reality can climb
with four fingers and a shattered spine
needles digging into whatever it can seek and find

These are my memories let them burn...
till somethings earned broken or turned
like hearts cloaked in madness
and rain pelted savages knowing full well...
what lies beneath depression
a soul embarking...
laced with tension and aggression
ready to tear through a new world
just to to see...
this current one from the shadows

These are my memories...
aflame and scrambling to escape the light
let them burn... till the pheonix chokes on smoke
and nothing is born again.... but torn ideas
emerging from an ocean of bones
**** it... you call this home?
all i see is misfit desires
floating away to a cascade into sunlight
but theres nothing fuking happy about it
just a soul open to ignorant rebuttals

these are my memories...
let them...
FORGET IT I'm watching them burn already.

to be honest, i donnt why i am single, prob because im a nice guy and most "not all so dont kill me lol" girls want the kinda guy that treats her like sh1t and cheats on her, dont ask me why but thats how it seems



along with what he said ^

yea lol

good movie, go get shooter, its the sh1t u will love it

good movie, go watch it.

chad, join a MMA gym, best people to hang around with ever, then go out an have some fun with friends

i could do vocals but im in ohio lol

its cool bro, works a priority gotta pay the bills lol. yea fedor dasnt want real comp anymore i think, or he has seen how some of the other pride fighters have done in the ufc and thinks he may not fair well. hes still a great fighter but he needs to quit waisting time and get to the ufc, ther a monopoly, all the best fighters will end up there in the end.

hey granit, whats your gym called? i found a closer gym in columbus called buckeye mma so im going to start training there. they seem like some cool peeps so i cant wait.

what u guys think about this fight with Fedor and cha fu man choe or whatever his name is lol, hes like 7'3 and 320 or something, i see him getting owned by fedor.

jaming