the day has come when ur time is done
and you leave this world behind
noone has lived to tell what the afterlife gives
is it just all in your mind?

the sight goes first and no longer can you look upon your childs face
then goes the feeling yet you still feel out of place
the hearing next and no longer can you hear their cries
what comes next is deaths suprise

down comes the light that your supposed to go to
but your family is here so how can you
you take a second glance but walk away
you have to finish what you didnt get to that day

far away your family has left you behind
and you are stuck here biding your time

then comes time for you to leave this forsaken place behind
its time that the wheel of destiny begins to unwind

you take a step into the light and feel at last releived
no longer are you in pain and no longer are you decieved



not really sure what i wanted to ppl to get from this one, i guess make sure u live life to its fullst everyday, and someday we will all make this walk. ima try writing somethen more on a happy note lol next, all mine seem to be a little on the dark side lol

later
J

damn, one for the ladies, someone better snag um he knows what hes talkin bout

cheers bro

very true, everyone strives to be first and the best in life.
so simple, but portrays so much

nice, everyone hopes for this, or atleast a majority of us... someday

Well, I'll not have it.
F*ck those sanitary little tidbits
That control every one of us.
I'm gonna find my own path
Even if it be through the sun--


stand up and do what u want, hold your ground

john doe

Ice sickles form on the tips of my beard
Not shavin, been freezing for some odd years
Color faded, white echoing long lost cheer
I hear the shattering sound of a frozen tear

I wake up at seven and hit the invisible snooze
Close my eyes and forget about the holes in my shoes
Pretending that I have a daily wardrobe to choose
Assuming that out there, there’s a drug to be used

Trying to remember the feel of a bed
Remember the feeling of a pillow under my head
I sleep on the cold damp concrete instead
Close my eyes and wish that I was dead

Read the daily news while it keeps me warm
Heard the same story a thousand times before, I’ve sworn
Been blessed with bad luck since I was born
Should of know one day my cloths would be tattered and torn

I call the streets my home, rain sun or snow
Tattered feet walk the concrete flow
Look in the eyes of passer bys ill never know
If you were wondering my name…they call me John Doe

This was good, had some flow to it "rhyming lol" nice

lol na its all mind games when it comes to me and this poetry stuff lol, i try to find ways to make it interesting and relate to people i know and there situations, he didnt throw her off the cliff eather lol all is ok

She loves me, she loves me not, I hate how the pain is brought
But I swear to god that she'll be mine... Her acceptance is always sought
So I'd have fought a million times and been ready to up and die
Just to spend my life in euphoria with perfection by my side
And yes I lied to keep you here, but only to avoid my fears
Even when you said I lack emotion I literally tatood tears
So now its been years but I love you and everything we've been through
Thats why today it pains me to see you with that other dude
And not to be rude but we're still in love, I swear it frome day one
I mean how can you just up and leave...
It used to be fun but now growing old you know how our story goes
Restraining orders, cops at my door... well now ***** my blood runs cold
Now the feelings fold, its not the same... you didnt even know I had a name
And how dare you call this obsession! I could care less about your fame.
So prepare to be slain and yes this is a cliff, not an illusion.
And I didnt do it... but now you must, literally jump to conclusions

lol give um a few more years, they will get better, cuzz they cant get much worse lol. na but there doing good for now better then i expected. they need to get some of those OSU players on the roster damnit.

lol its gun if u got the time.

chevelle ---- well enough alone

I'm bout to get Vicious, fuk my Attitude/
I know some *****es who get tossed more than Salad's do/
But I ain't mad at you/
Im just sad it's you/
Cuz back in tha day, there wasn't One badder whooo/
You use to be the talk of the town when you was walkin around/
You use to walk with a Crown but now days the Boyz talkin you down/
N it's Ashame cuz you use to run the Game/T
hey said you was hotter than flames but now when we mention your name,/
they just laughin' there ass off cuz alot of em Banged/
It's makes me mad cuz you ain't see what you had/
You got caught up in the fads & lost track of your pad/
So you strayed & it was games you played/
If you stayed you woulda had it made

Chours

you dug your own grave/
Insisted to move & was caught in the Raid/
But you ain't care tho you enjoyed the weirdo's/
I offered to share more on my knee's til tears showed/
I couldn't see you get tossed/
But you refused my help so that was the cost in this World colder than frost/
You turnt to a Ho with Selfish Luck & started to self destruct/
Lost control after the buck & after they ****ed you wasn't **** but a Ho down on your luck/
But I stood by you & insisted to guide you/
True love I supplied you,
suprised you but now deep in my Heart Bich I despise you/

Chours

Knew you my whole life but ain't quite Understand/
Explained that this World is trife even tho its Sight is Wonderland/
But you ain't Listen & proceeded your Mission/
Lost position in the transition & after the fun was thru, they was done with you & you wasn't more than a mention/
But I understood the Message which was Urgent enclosed, you was a Virgin exposed/
In the beginning the One right man was chose but you froze, became a One night stand & got labeled with Ho's/
And I was caught in the glitch & couldn't time the pitch/
I should of knew it was comin' I felt the itch but now I feel dumb because in the end all you were was a dumb *****

Chorus


there ya go lol, i was bored so i wrote ya a whole song lol.

u want a poem kinda thing to go with it for versus or u want some freestyle rhyming ****?

thanks

10:18 fuk dishes gotta shine the bling.

10:47

depends on what all is happening on this date

would u expect for a guy to take u on a shoping spree on your first date?

sure

would u be pissed if the guy made u pick up the tab on the first date?

10:11 gotta go to sleep soon, work starts at seven

10:16

9:59 lets get this game rolling, quit wasting time

10:10