I was hoping to have about 11 pieces to it.
I am currently working on a concept piece.
That would deffinately be the ultimate goal.
I started on writing last night, and came up
with about 3 parts.. But I'm rewriting them
trying to work out the bugs tonight. I presume
I will then work on the rest. 3 parts at a time.

THANK YOU very much though! =]]

Keep it covered up. There is a time and place.
If you're out, for god sake, keep it to yourself.
Not everyone wants to see your chest. And if they
do, I'm damn sure they'll try to get with you.
And if they're trying to get with you, you know
they're a jerk that want's to get in your pants. =D

GREAT flow over the words.
That's a keeper. =]

A VERSE AND CHORUS FOR A SONG THAT I'M WORKING ON.


My in-depth context has gone astray
So says my inner self, pawned away
Hard it is to finally believe it
But so easy it is to conceive this
A recollection of a memory that passed
My constitution of my full life forecast
And on my day of self independence
It downpours hard to end my existence

Win it will not
A fight I have brought
These visions I have
Will free me from consumption
A battle I will bring
Bearing fire and dreams
Will stop this madness
Overcast skies will not have this

Much thanks.. Another freestyle.
Decided to maybe add a little dry scarcastic humor to it at the last line.

Faithless promises and full proof lies,
Are the breaking off of all your ties.
You hinder all of your pure being left,
By trying to hard to let go and forget.
But forget not the bearing of all your words,
And the meanings that I find to be so abserd.
To believe you would be the end of my days,
And to trust you would be anyones greatest mistake.
But one could never forget what I had,
And it was nothing great.
For you were my biggest downfall,
Yeah, baby.. You took the cake.

10-4. Haha.

Thank you, I appreciate it a lot.. It's been a while since I posted to the creative writing section of this site.

Agreed.
Life happens alright. Haha, just have to laugh at all of the punches life throws at you and roll with them, I presume.

Thanks. It was kind of a freestyle thing.
I'll probably end up using it as lyrics
for a song I made. It pretty much sums up
what I feel like right now.

I sit here on this dismal night,
Quietly think and ponder why.
How has this all come to fold?
Is it this network that I hold?

A web of lies that make me new,
I passionately think so deeply of you.
But all that's left is this tangled mess.
A knot so tight I can't even depress.

I nod off slowly and fall out of the fight,
I think that's all that's in me tonight.
So motionless I lie on the cold damp floor,
Just pleading and screaming, no more no more.

--RyanJon

There's just as much of a reason of hatred for Obama as there was for Bush Jr. Just look how he's driving out country into the ground. Our economic state is more fragile and will remain on the track downward. He WILL declare marshal law as said earlier in this thread. And if I can't give you enough information, take 2 hours of time out of your day.. Go to http://www.youtube.com/ and search "The Obama Deception". It should be 1hr 56min and so many seconds long. All the information you need to hate him there.

Ah, well.. I don't know about the whole Obama family being evil, but he sure as hell is. I swear, he is the anti-christ.

I got a 96 2dr Cherokee Sport. Love it. If I'm not mistaken, It's the same i6 they've used since the willys, hah. Maybe not that long, but I'll tell ya'.. It's been around forever.

If they're THAT dangerous to society that we have them locked up, fry em' the Texas way. I'll take my terrorist well done.

don't quote me that they will do that, but just knowing how the govt. works with screwing people out of money somehow.. they will find a way.

Skip the tourture and just do away with them all. If they're terrorists like the govt. says they are, off with their heads. Just my opinion.

An agreement is null and void if they go bankrupt and end up selling out. Especially if our govt. buys them out. They'll do anything to punish anyone who's not someone, you know?

If they merge with Fiat and make some sort of deal with the govt. (which they shouldn't), you may be making payments out to the Fiat Motor Co. If they go under, the govt. will probably buy it out and you'll pay them MORE money. What a freakin' suprise.

IMHO, they should let all of these companies fail. AIG, Chrysler, CitiGroup.. All of them. Make way for new companies because that's what happens.

BTW, if they go under, I hope you don't have the lifetime powertrain warrenty, because It's down the toilet, lol.

Hurah to that buddy.
Have a 90 Aerostar with 295K on an origional motor and trans. Still kicking!