Topic: Pure?
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Tue 05/05/09 09:12 PM
Faithless promises and full proof lies,
Are the breaking off of all your ties.
You hinder all of your pure being left,
By trying to hard to let go and forget.
But forget not the bearing of all your words,
And the meanings that I find to be so abserd.
To believe you would be the end of my days,
And to trust you would be anyones greatest mistake.
But one could never forget what I had,
And it was nothing great.
For you were my biggest downfall,
Yeah, baby.. You took the cake.

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Tue 05/05/09 09:15 PM
drinker Nicely Done.flowers

nvkikigirl's photo
Tue 05/05/09 09:16 PM
great.:thumbsup: waving

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Tue 05/05/09 09:22 PM
flowerforyou

RyanJonx33's photo
Tue 05/05/09 09:25 PM
Much thanks.. Another freestyle.
Decided to maybe add a little dry scarcastic humor to it at the last line.

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Tue 05/05/09 10:14 PM
The sarcastic humour worked...Good write...flowerforyou