A VERSE AND CHORUS FOR A SONG THAT I'M WORKING ON.


My in-depth context has gone astray
So says my inner self, pawned away
Hard it is to finally believe it
But so easy it is to conceive this
A recollection of a memory that passed
My constitution of my full life forecast
And on my day of self independence
It downpours hard to end my existence

Win it will not
A fight I have brought
These visions I have
Will free me from consumption
A battle I will bring
Bearing fire and dreams
Will stop this madness
Overcast skies will not have this

a Part I...will there be a Part II...as in a concept peice? nice start!

I was hoping to have about 11 pieces to it.
I am currently working on a concept piece.
That would deffinately be the ultimate goal.
I started on writing last night, and came up
with about 3 parts.. But I'm rewriting them
trying to work out the bugs tonight. I presume
I will then work on the rest. 3 parts at a time.

THANK YOU very much though! =]]

It is a great start...I look forward to seeing this in its finished state in the written word, and then a youtube thing with the music to go with it... ......

I could put it up on my myspace.. I'd give you the url now but an admin. will yell at me again because It's promotion. O.o