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I sit here on this dismal night,
Quietly think and ponder why. How has this all come to fold? Is it this network that I hold? A web of lies that make me new, I passionately think so deeply of you. But all that's left is this tangled mess. A knot so tight I can't even depress. I nod off slowly and fall out of the fight, I think that's all that's in me tonight. So motionless I lie on the cold damp floor, Just pleading and screaming, no more no more. --RyanJon |
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Great write! I can relate.
 
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Great write! I can relate.
Thanks. It was kind of a freestyle thing. I'll probably end up using it as lyrics for a song I made. It pretty much sums up what I feel like right now. |
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Edited by
nvkikigirl
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Tue 05/05/09 08:42 PM
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Thats a really good idea, I can see many people relating to this, and these being phrases that they will like to come back to time and again as life "happens."
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nice write..
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Agreed.
Life happens alright. Haha, just have to laugh at all of the punches life throws at you and roll with them, I presume. |
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nice write..
Thank you, I appreciate it a lot.. It's been a while since I posted to the creative writing section of this site. |
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Agreed. Life happens alright. Haha, just have to laugh at all of the punches life throws at you and roll with them, I presume. 
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Agreed. Life happens alright. Haha, just have to laugh at all of the punches life throws at you and roll with them, I presume.
 10-4. Haha.
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definitely keep on writing!! great stuff!!
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