Topic: Broken mirror
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Sat 05/03/08 02:21 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Sat 05/03/08 02:32 AM
Broken mirror

A round trip ticket across eternity emotional baggage held within.
Images of the mind scattered upon paisley dreams.
Past memories hijack reality, while echoing silent regrets.
A puzzle of broken promises cast a reflection from within the heart.

Life becomes a broken mirror sunset memories on the shores of your heart.


A destruction of virtue a marry go round of failed conclusions of consequence.
Tears of a clown the show of life must go on while building a wall of tears.
Days turn into years, while you loose yourself from within a self appointed obsession.
Emancipation of the heart falls on death ears of the soul in solitude of itself.

Life becomes a broken mirror sunset memories on the shores of your heart.


You may never be happy with anyone else if your not happy with yourself.
The emotional scars you fail to see will appear openly upon the soul.
Encrypted messages sail across a sea of glass the window too the soul.
Distant shores of a broken mirror reflect illusions of the past still held within your heart.
Life answers all your questions with only silence, and a broken heart.smokin



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Sat 05/03/08 02:26 AM
drinker drinker

boneyjoe's photo
Sat 05/03/08 02:31 AM
goood write

mandyatl81's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:14 AM
The emotional scars you fail to see will appear openly upon the soul.

those words are so true.......i liked your writeflowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:38 AM
Very well put, all of us have suffered tremendous pain in our lives i'm sure...drinker

rush2001's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:44 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sat 05/03/08 06:55 AM
Sadly, sometimes Heartache is the shadow of Love.smokin

pkh's photo
Sat 05/03/08 06:59 AM
flowerforyou good write

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Sat 05/03/08 06:59 AM
drinker :smile: drinker

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Sat 05/03/08 02:46 PM
thanks..glasses

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Sat 05/03/08 08:28 PM
flowerforyou good write.

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Sat 05/10/08 06:41 AM
Thanks again..:wink: glasses smokin

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Sun 05/11/08 06:07 PM
What an awsome theory of writing I really enjoyed reading a well put together thought out emphasis on only what the heart feels and knows. It is so true and well written I sat here just in awe of how creative one's mind can relate to the many areas of life. Thank you for sharing
Love:
Carol

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Sun 05/11/08 07:58 PM
Past memories hijack reality, while echoing silent regrets
nice line
good poem